James F Hyla’s review of Locked by His Nurse: Femdom Chastity Novella (Chastity & Locked Novellas: Mistresses, Keyholders & Hotwives) > Likes and Comments

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message 1: by Miss (new)

Miss Kalimala I’m glad the slow-build tease-and-denial vibe worked for you, and your points about realism and the last stretch are totally fair. And yeah... that ending was very much meant to leave him, and the reader, hanging ahahah


message 2: by James F Hyla (new)

James F Hyla Thanks for your response. Indeed I felt the beginning right through me. I really appreciate when people, most especially authors, respond to my review. I can’t always get the right nuance or interpretation. I’m glad you took my criticism as constructive, which I hope is how I always review.


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