Thank you for reading and for such detailed feedback, Emily—I truly appreciate it. I’m glad some of the imagery and world-building stood out to you.
Your thoughts on the characters, especially Melissa, were helpful. Since the book was originally written over ten years ago, I’ve revisited it for a newer edition and made some subtle changes with perspectives like yours in mind.
Thanks again for giving it a try and for sharing your thoughts.
Your thoughts on the characters, especially Melissa, were helpful. Since the book was originally written over ten years ago, I’ve revisited it for a newer edition and made some subtle changes with perspectives like yours in mind.
Thanks again for giving it a try and for sharing your thoughts.
— J. Suthern Hicks