Shiny’s review of Marked By Him (The Inked Line Book 2) > Likes and Comments
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Hi hi! Cam’s mom actually didn’t come back that time, I mentioned that briefly in Chapter 11, but I definitely think I could’ve clarified it a little better in the main story. The full context is explained more in the bonus scene when people sign up for the newsletter.
i feel like the issue you have with the storytelling/writing… was AI.
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May 08, 2026 09:46PM
Hi hi! Cam’s mom actually didn’t come back that time, I mentioned that briefly in Chapter 11, but I definitely think I could’ve clarified it a little better in the main story. The full context is explained more in the bonus scene when people sign up for the newsletter.
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i feel like the issue you have with the storytelling/writing… was AI.