Thanks so much for giving the book a shot, even if it ultimately wasn’t the right fit for you. I genuinely appreciate the honest feedback. As a first-time author, constructive criticism like this is incredibly valuable and helps me continue improving both future revisions of Siege of the Forgotten Order and for Book 2 as well.
I know the heavier mystery/lore build-up and slower early pacing won’t connect with every reader, especially if you’re looking for faster character-driven momentum right away. That’s something I’m actively working on strengthening moving forward.
Still, I appreciate you taking the time to read part of the journey and leave a thoughtful review. Wishing you many more great reads ahead!
I know the heavier mystery/lore build-up and slower early pacing won’t connect with every reader, especially if you’re looking for faster character-driven momentum right away. That’s something I’m actively working on strengthening moving forward.
Still, I appreciate you taking the time to read part of the journey and leave a thoughtful review. Wishing you many more great reads ahead!
-Garrett