Thanks Frank. I appreciate the feedback. I do take it on board and look to improve. The beauty of an indie author is - I can do what the heck I want! That includes making revisions while published - which I will continue to do. This work is an open source project in effect. A website with a discussion platform is on the way, as well as an audio version in production. I’m in this for the long haul. Debate around some of the near future themes is also a part of the intent. Your assessment is fair. I have created a broad canvas populated with eight developed characters (some for now some for the future), and dropped breadcrumbs for the next novel throughout. The challenge for a work like this is to keep the audience entertained through the process of extensive world and character building. I still have work to do there, and have already made improvements since your review. I will keep at it.
Your assessment is fair. I have created a broad canvas populated with eight developed characters (some for now some for the future), and dropped breadcrumbs for the next novel throughout. The challenge for a work like this is to keep the audience entertained through the process of extensive world and character building. I still have work to do there, and have already made improvements since your review. I will keep at it.
Thanks again.