Thanks Jeff. I acknowledged that, and I am still working on those aspects. I think I have made good headway since your review in the latest version. I am finding producing the audio book has helped as well. It has provided a different perspective to work in and add more depth and flow to character and world building aspects. The oral narrative process really brings it out and inspires in a different way, which is interesting in itself. I will keep at it, until I get 4 stars out of you!
I need to get back into V Two soon, once the audio book and website are up and running (in between a full-on full time job of course). Almost all reviewers (published online or otherwise) identify just how big this story will get from here - and they are right! It is a little daunting and exciting at the same time, there are many contemporary themes in there to explore through storytelling.
This is a long haul labour of love project and I really appreciate the feedback.
I need to get back into V Two soon, once the audio book and website are up and running (in between a full-on full time job of course). Almost all reviewers (published online or otherwise) identify just how big this story will get from here - and they are right! It is a little daunting and exciting at the same time, there are many contemporary themes in there to explore through storytelling.
This is a long haul labour of love project and I really appreciate the feedback.
Thanks again.