THE ECHO CONSPIRACY (title may change) 78K words She was brought in to contain the story. She built the story. A crisis communications expert takes a contract with a behavioral research firm and begins uncovering a memory manipulation system embedded across its subjects until she realizes the system is hers, the architecture is hers, and the three-line directive that kept it running after shutdown was entered at the last moment by her own hand. Now it's distributed through a hospital network, invisible, and expanding.
Looking for: Honest feedback on pacing, whether the three-part structure earns its length, and whether the central antagonist is sufficiently personal given what he did to her.
No line edits needed. 2-3 week turnaround. PDF format. Post your email below if interested.
She was brought in to contain the story. She built the story. A crisis communications expert takes a contract with a behavioral research firm and begins uncovering a memory manipulation system embedded across its subjects until she realizes the system is hers, the architecture is hers, and the three-line directive that kept it running after shutdown was entered at the last moment by her own hand. Now it's distributed through a hospital network, invisible, and expanding.
Looking for: Honest feedback on pacing, whether the three-part structure earns its length, and whether the central antagonist is sufficiently personal given what he did to her.
No line edits needed. 2-3 week turnaround. PDF format. Post your email below if interested.