ChapterAddict Aka Kelly’s review of Good Things Come > Likes and Comments

Thank you so much for your detailed and thoughtful review! I am so glad the creepy atmosphere and tension in Adam's world kept you reading, but your feedback about the flow and confusion is incredibly valuable. You perfectly diagnosed the issue—I realized I had crammed way too much information into Chapters 57–62, which threw off the pacing and emotional buildup. I have officially streamlined and tightened those exact chapters to let the twists and character decisions breathe. The updated copy is live today (June 13) on NetGalley via Victory Editing if you ever want to re-download it. Thank you for helping me refine this story!

Thank you so much for this reply. Honestly, hearing an author actually listen to feedback like this means a lot. You could definitely feel the atmosphere and tension throughout the story, and knowing you went back and tightened those chapters up says a whole lot about the kind of writer you are. A lot of authors would not take criticism this openly.

I still enjoyed the creepy vibe and the uneasiness surrounding Adam the whole way through, and I truly appreciate you taking the time to respond and explain some of the pacing issues I noticed. Wishing you nothing but success with the book and your future writing. I will definitely keep reading your work.

Thank you so much for your kind words. I find feedback and extremely valuable tool, and I truly appreciate the time you took not only to read the book but also to share your thoughts.

Thank you again for your support and encouragement. I hope you'll enjoy what I have coming next just as much. Happy reading! Ina