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Thank you! Been saying this since I've read it.
Honestly, they start off as two different characters. Then a few chapters later, they're both the same character. It was written so badly ive seen wattpad stories with better prose. Wtf. It has 9k reviews on amazon with 4*!!!!!! The plot is horrendous, the sex scenes were whatever, but god the writing was sooooo bad
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Mar 13, 2025 07:22AM
Thank you! Been saying this since I've read it.
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Honestly, they start off as two different characters. Then a few chapters later, they're both the same character. It was written so badly ive seen wattpad stories with better prose. Wtf. It has 9k reviews on amazon with 4*!!!!!! The plot is horrendous, the sex scenes were whatever, but god the writing was sooooo bad

