Rachel’s review of VANITY: The Fugitive of Bern (A Most Unlikely Hero) > Likes and Comments

Thank you most kindly for your review & your useful feedback.

I'm actually wielding my Booksirens campaign to garner such feedback & to tweak here & there.

I shall duly ponder your point on that element of repetition. & I think I already know a scene I can cut :)

Thanks a trillion! :)