Jeanah’s review of Beneath the Morrow's Light: A Pride and Prejudice Variation (What If… A Pride & Prejudice Variation Series”) > Likes and Comments
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I read it and had a friend read it. We found two when I first published but if i am still missing one and you call where id love if it could be pointed out. Though I did find one of them was amazon upload added it, that one was hard to find and fix. But thank you for the review
There are still many repeated sections. Go back to the drawing board.
How many times can your characters dive out before the steps are down--BTW, they'd hurt themselves badly doing this.
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Jul 04, 2026 03:02PM
I read it and had a friend read it. We found two when I first published but if i am still missing one and you call where id love if it could be pointed out. Though I did find one of them was amazon upload added it, that one was hard to find and fix. But thank you for the review
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There are still many repeated sections. Go back to the drawing board.
How many times can your characters dive out before the steps are down--BTW, they'd hurt themselves badly doing this.