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Thank you Allison for the text of the review. You have brought those issues to my attention and will repair them to make the story more coherant. Not passing the buck, but I did have an editor review the story. What I do need are advance readers like you who will pick up on continuity issues. I would love to have your help for Book 2, so I can avoid issues.
Thanks for taking it constructively.
Would you really let a random internet stranger be an advance reader for Book 2? :o I would do it, I suppose. I may complain a lot though. For example, I have many more thoughts about Book 1.... but I didn't want to lambast the thing to death publicly any more than I did. Because it has its good points too. If you want to hear my full commentary let me know - I can provide it either here, or privately. For whatever reason I have thought WAY too much about this book.
I would like to hear your comments, since I want to provide the best story possible. I really want to thank you for your efforts to help. I would never complain when people spend their time to offer constructive comments. My email is stevensmithvo(at)gmail.com . If you could email me I would be very appreciative.
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Jul 04, 2026 05:44PM
Thank you Allison for the text of the review. You have brought those issues to my attention and will repair them to make the story more coherant. Not passing the buck, but I did have an editor review the story. What I do need are advance readers like you who will pick up on continuity issues. I would love to have your help for Book 2, so I can avoid issues.
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Thanks for taking it constructively. Would you really let a random internet stranger be an advance reader for Book 2? :o I would do it, I suppose. I may complain a lot though. For example, I have many more thoughts about Book 1.... but I didn't want to lambast the thing to death publicly any more than I did. Because it has its good points too. If you want to hear my full commentary let me know - I can provide it either here, or privately. For whatever reason I have thought WAY too much about this book.
I would like to hear your comments, since I want to provide the best story possible. I really want to thank you for your efforts to help. I would never complain when people spend their time to offer constructive comments. My email is stevensmithvo(at)gmail.com . If you could email me I would be very appreciative.