Zachary’s review of Escape from Media: Where Magic is Forbidden and Love is Dangerous (Echoes of Aloria, #1) > Likes and Comments
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I do really appreciate the feedback. I assure you multiple editors and beta readers were involved. It is a Romantasy and without some of those expected sexy quips and scenes... other readers would have been turned off. I have been in talks with a publishing company, which would get a full rewrite. I will definitely take your feedback to heart when I make the next round of adjustments. There is solid reason for Zane and Zee to be named as they are. When we return to Media at the end of the series, we will definitely understand why Media is the way they are and why they are allowed to be safe for Non-magicals. I don't believe in info dumping unless it is absolutely needed to understand and appreciate at that time. I let things unfold naturally or info left in for Easter eggs for future books... this also adds to suspense in the story. I do hope you read Journey to Aloria. I think you might prefer Tomes of Moreth, as it's not a Romance.
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I do really appreciate the feedback. I assure you multiple editors and beta readers were involved. It is a Romantasy and without some of those expected sexy quips and scenes... other readers would have been turned off. I have been in talks with a publishing company, which would get a full rewrite. I will definitely take your feedback to heart when I make the next round of adjustments. There is solid reason for Zane and Zee to be named as they are. When we return to Media at the end of the series, we will definitely understand why Media is the way they are and why they are allowed to be safe for Non-magicals. I don't believe in info dumping unless it is absolutely needed to understand and appreciate at that time. I let things unfold naturally or info left in for Easter eggs for future books... this also adds to suspense in the story. I do hope you read Journey to Aloria. I think you might prefer Tomes of Moreth, as it's not a Romance.
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