Hello! Thank you so much for reading my novel so quickly !! I just wanted to clarify some aspects that you highlighted.
The way the magic locket works will be explained in the following books of the series (as it is a saga composed by 4 books that continue the adventures of Eloisa and Richard). Book 2 is already published in Italian and I will translate it soon. About the ghetto, I had no intention to offend others' sensitivity, and I am sorry that passage gave you that impression. But unfortunateley, at that time in Venice, that kind of pawnshop existed only in the ghetto! And I represented the man in that way for narrative purposes only. I also want to thank you again for your great and accurate review :) I am so glad the novel read well even if it's a translation! :)
I just wanted to clarify some aspects that you highlighted.
The way the magic locket works will be explained in the following books of the series (as it is a saga composed by 4 books that continue the adventures of Eloisa and Richard). Book 2 is already published in Italian and I will translate it soon. About the ghetto, I had no intention to offend others' sensitivity, and I am sorry that passage gave you that impression. But unfortunateley, at that time in Venice, that kind of pawnshop existed only in the ghetto! And I represented the man in that way for narrative purposes only.
I also want to thank you again for your great and accurate review :) I am so glad the novel read well even if it's a translation! :)