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I started reading this one a little while ago and got stuck and haven't read more in it. I love the prose and some of the metaphorical writing but perhaps keeping it more metaphorical and removing some of the allegory may have helped the story side.
I think you're right; less would have been more in this case.
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Jul 21, 2026 10:28PM
I started reading this one a little while ago and got stuck and haven't read more in it. I love the prose and some of the metaphorical writing but perhaps keeping it more metaphorical and removing some of the allegory may have helped the story side.
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I think you're right; less would have been more in this case.