Thank you, Traci! In retrospect, I'll admit "incredulously" may not have been best. But the first draft used incredibly, which felt bland and in need of something more to show how unbelievable it was. I'll dig deeper in the thesaurus next time!
Thank you for the kind words and review, that is the exact balance, tone, and pace I was hoping to give readers. And if I can convert one hiker to the rain wrap, it was all worth it. :-)
Thank you for the kind words and review, that is the exact balance, tone, and pace I was hoping to give readers. And if I can convert one hiker to the rain wrap, it was all worth it. :-)