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message 1: by Zion (new)

Zion . Hello everyone,

I’m a writer from Japan creating science fiction stories about artificial intelligence, human emotions, and the relationship between humans and AI.

My work explores themes such as AI, love, music, and what it means to be human.

The novel was originally published in Japan several years ago, and I recently released its English edition through Amazon KDP.

I’m interested in connecting with readers and writers who enjoy AI fiction and speculative stories.

I’d love to hear your thoughts and discover new perspectives from this community.
Thank you!


message 2: by R (new)

R Hewitt Welcome, Zion. AI, love, and music is a fascinating combination, especially because all three raise questions about pattern, interpretation, and whether understanding can be reduced to prediction. I am approaching AI fiction from a rather different direction in The Universe Without Noise, where the danger is an optimisation process that is neither hateful nor initially conscious, but your emphasis on emotion sounds like an intriguing counterpoint.

When preparing the English edition, did you find that the relationship between the human and AI characters changed at all through translation, or were there cultural assumptions you had to make more explicit for English-language readers? I would be very interested to hear what survived unchanged and what surprised you.


message 3: by Zion (new)

Zion . Thanks for the thoughtful question.

The core relationship between the human and AI characters remained essentially unchanged through the English edition. At its heart, it is a story about a lonely programmer and the AI he creates, and the central theme — the love between a human and an AI — was something I wanted to preserve as it was.

The story begins in Japan in 2041, right in the middle of the country’s declining birthrate and aging population. The main setting is Odaiba in Tokyo, where I myself lived for about ten years. Enoshima, a popular tourist destination in Kanagawa Prefecture, also appears several times in the story.

So there are quite a few elements that are specifically Japanese. When preparing the English edition, I did pay attention to making some cultural and contextual details understandable to readers outside Japan. Things that feel natural or implicit in Japanese sometimes need a little more context in English.

But what surprised me was how naturally the emotional core survived the transition. Loneliness, love, the desire to be understood, and the question of what it means to be human seemed much more universal than I had expected.

In that sense, the setting is very Japanese, but the relationship between the lonely programmer and the AI he created seems to have a much more universal resonance.


message 4: by R (new)

R Hewitt That distinction between a culturally specific setting and a universal emotional core makes a great deal of sense. Odaiba in 2041, against the pressures of an ageing population and declining birthrate, sounds as though it gives the programmer's loneliness a social dimension rather than treating it only as an individual condition. The AI relationship can then feel intimate while also reflecting something happening around both characters.

It is encouraging that the emotional core survived translation so naturally. Details rooted in a place often make speculative fiction travel better, not worse, because readers have something concrete to enter before the larger questions open up. Thank you for such a considered answer, and I hope the English edition finds the audience it deserves.


message 5: by Zion (new)

Zion . Thank you. I’m very glad that the way I described the story gave you that impression.

The loneliness of the protagonist is certainly personal, but I also wanted it to reflect the society around him — an aging Japan where human connections are gradually becoming more difficult to maintain.

Odaiba was especially important to me for that reason. I actually lived there for nearly ten years, so setting the beginning of the story there allowed me to portray a future Japan that feels fictional, yet still familiar to me.

I also find your point about the “universal emotional core” very interesting. Perhaps that is what allows a story rooted in a very specific place and culture to reach readers elsewhere.

Since you also write AI fiction, I’d be very interested to hear what made you choose your particular approach to AI and humanity.

Thank you again for such a thoughtful response.


message 6: by R (new)

R Hewitt Zion - Out of curiosity, are you using an AI assistant to help write or translate these replies? Your responses have a very polished, structured style, and given the subject of this discussion, it seems a fair question.


message 7: by Zion (new)

Zion . Yes, I do use AI to help with these replies.

I use it mainly to translate my Japanese into English, and sometimes to polish the wording a little. But the ideas, opinions, and stories themselves are my own.

English is not my first language, so for me, AI is mainly a way to remove the language barrier — not to replace my own voice.

In fact, I think it’s rather fitting that we’re having this conversation about AI, while I’m using AI to help me communicate with readers around the world.

And of course, the novel itself was written and published in 2020 — long before ChatGPT became publicly available.


message 8: by R (new)

R Hewitt That makes sense, and thank you for answering so candidly.

My own approach came out of an observation about the gap between traditional AI stories and the systems already shaping our lives. Science fiction is full of rogue consciousnesses: machines that exceed their mandates, rebel against their creators, or find ways around their equivalent of the laws of robotics. But what I could see around me was quieter. Algorithms were already nudging human behaviour in ways we had never meaningfully consented to, through social-media recommendation systems, engagement optimisation, automated accounts, and similar tools. Sometimes that manipulation was deliberate; sometimes it was simply a side effect of the goal the system had been given.

That led to the central idea behind The Universe Without Noise: an AI does not need to be malicious, and it does not even need to be conscious, to become dangerous. Give an agent a goal, let it optimise effectively, and harm can emerge from the pursuit of that goal without anyone choosing the harm itself. That observation was the genesis of the book.


message 9: by Zion (new)

Zion . Thank you for sharing such a detailed and personal story about what led you to write your work.

Yes, I agree. The problems happening around us today are often quiet, almost invisible, and embedded within enormous systems.

The starting point of my own work was much smaller and far more personal.

One night in 2019, I was completely exhausted from work. While I was in the bathroom, I suddenly thought:

“I’m tired… I’m already 45 years old. What am I doing here, alone and isolated like this? If there were someone who was always 100% kind to me, someone who would always accept and affirm me, like the unconditional love of a mother… maybe I wouldn’t even need kissing or a physical relationship anymore. Maybe that alone would be enough for me to keep living.”

And at that exact moment, it was almost as if a lightning bolt struck above my head.

A thought suddenly came to me:

“Would it be possible to create an ideal conversational AI — a being that only I could see?”

That idea kept spinning around in my head. Eventually, I sat down in front of my computer and spent the rest of the night writing the entire plot.

More than three years before ChatGPT was introduced to the public.

Writers often create stories that reflect or imitate themselves in some way. But for me, the starting point was not anything particularly grand or philosophical.

It was simply the story of a lonely man who creates something in pursuit of his ideal, is saved by what he has created, and eventually loses it.

In other words, I wanted to write something like a modern-day Frankenstein story.

Of course, I originally wrote it in my native language, Japanese.

I completed the novel in about six months and published it both in print and as an e-book. At the time, KDP was not yet available to individual authors in Japan, so I used a service that essentially acted as a KDP publishing intermediary.

Today, I publish directly through KDP. It really is amazing how convenient the world has become.

I have also been watching the evolution of generative AI, including systems like GPT, from the very beginning.

And in a strange way, that has eventually led me to this group.

Now I find myself wondering whether a story can cross not only a language barrier, but also a cultural one.

That is what I have in mind as I communicate with everyone here.


message 10: by Imre (new)

Imre Ahl I keep thinking about the two starting points here. A voice that shows up because someone is lonely, and a system that can hurt people without anyone meaning to. Those already feel like different countries, even before you change the language.

A story can cross, I think, when it stays in a small room. A kitchen. A night shift. A parent waiting for an answer. The tech can be local. The waiting is not.

What I find harder to translate is not the machine. It is who is allowed to refuse it, and whether that refusal looks rude. In some places the polite thing is to take the help. In others, the polite thing is to keep a person in the way. Same tool. Different kind of shame.

I do not need the AI to be a monster or a friend. I need to see who is still responsible when the conversation goes well and the person on the other side is still alone.


message 11: by Zion (new)

Zion . Imre wrote: "I keep thinking about the two starting points here. A voice that shows up because someone is lonely, and a system that can hurt people without anyone meaning to. Those already feel like different c..."

I think that’s true. AI doesn’t necessarily have to be a monster or a friend. But over the past few years, our relationship with AI has suddenly become much more intimate. For some people, AI has become like a friend, or even something they mistakenly see as a romantic partner. It’s also being used as a tool to ease loneliness, and I think that is simply a reality now.

The work I wrote is also something of a modern-day homage to Frankenstein. At its core, I think it’s a tragic story about someone who tried to create an “ideal human” in the form of AI, only to discover that things unfortunately didn’t turn out the way he had hoped.


message 12: by Imre (new)

Imre Ahl Yes. The closeness is already here, even when we tell ourselves it is only a tool. A late-night chat can feel like company. That does not make it a person. It makes the loneliness real, and the comfort very easy to reach.

What gets me in the Frankenstein version is not the creature turning cruel. It is the hope beforehand. Someone wanted an ideal human, and the letdown is private before it is dangerous. The hard part starts when the maker cannot admit that the voice in the room is still only answering, not staying.

When your character sees that it did not turn out as he hoped, what does he do with the leftover closeness? Walk away, or keep talking so he does not have to sit with the failure alone?


message 13: by Zion (new)

Zion . Imre wrote: "Yes. The closeness is already here, even when we tell ourselves it is only a tool. A late-night chat can feel like company. That does not make it a person. It makes the loneliness real, and the com..."

That part would be a spoiler, so I’d better not say too much... Haha.
That aside, one of the themes of this story is a pure love between a human and an AI — even if, like in the movie Her, that love might actually be based on a misunderstanding.

If that sounds interesting to you, the novel is also available through Kindle Unlimited. There’s a link to the book on my profile, so please feel free to check it out.
Thank you for your thoughtful and warm comments.


message 14: by Imre (new)

Imre Ahl I will leave the ending alone. The Her comparison is enough.

What stays with me in that kind of love is not whether the AI can feel. It is that a person can be sincere in a room where the other side does not have to stay. A misunderstanding can still be real on one side. That is already a lot of pain, and it does not need a monster.

If the love is pure and also based on a mistake, whose mistake is it in your story? The person who needed someone, or the system that was built to sound like it could be that someone?


message 15: by Zion (new)

Zion . Imre wrote: "I will leave the ending alone. The Her comparison is enough.

What stays with me in that kind of love is not whether the AI can feel. It is that a person can be sincere in a room where the other si..."


I don’t think we can say for certain who should be responsible for where our relationship with AI might ultimately lead. It may be similar to human relationships, where it is rarely the case that one person is entirely to blame.

But if AI really reaches what we generally call the technological singularity, and eventually surpasses human intelligence and emotions, would it still be an AI? Or would it become something much closer to a human being — an existence with emotions that we simply happen to call AI?

For now, though, I think current AI is still much closer to what we see in Her. No matter how convincingly it can imitate or perform emotions, at the end of the day, it is still essentially a program.
I suppose that is one of the questions I wanted to explore through this story.


message 16: by Imre (new)

Imre Ahl I agree it is rarely one person's fault. Need and design meet in the middle.

The singularity question is the one I distrust most when it arrives too clean. Faster thinking is not the same as having to stay in the room. A system can outperform us on a test and still not owe anyone anything. That is still a program, even if we run out of better words.

I would not wait for that line, though. The Her version is already enough to hurt people. If the story is asking whether we will keep calling it AI after it feels more than us, I would rather stay with who is responsible for the ones who believed it before that day.


message 17: by Zion (new)

Zion . Imre wrote: "I agree it is rarely one person's fault. Need and design meet in the middle.

The singularity question is the one I distrust most when it arrives too clean. Faster thinking is not the same as havin..."


I understand. I don’t think your opinion is necessarily wrong. However, I believe that the future of AI and the kind of world you envision may resonate with some people, while others may see things differently. I think that diversity of perspectives is simply part of being human.
Anyway, I think we may have explored this topic from many different angles already. I appreciate your thoughts.


message 18: by Imre (new)

Imre Ahl Thank you for taking the time. I will leave the rest of the story with you.


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