Adult MM Romcom 62k > Likes and Comments

Hi all! Looking for betas. TIA.

Blurb:
Alex Reyes, a washed-up pop star, joins the queer dating show The One to resurrect his career. He’s planning to fake a perfect love story for the cameras—until he’s undone by the only contestant who refuses to follow the plans.

Jaime Ford, a cynical bartender, is cast as the season’s villain. He sees straight through Alex’s performance and twists it to his advantage. After all—he’s just there for the paycheck.

When their staged connection (a flashy on-camera romance) turns into real chemistry, they must decide whether real love is worth getting in the way of everything they want from the outside world.



Title: HE’S (NOT) THE ONE
Details:
Adult MM Romantic Comedy
Dual POV
Word count: ~62k 
Comps: THE FAKE DATING GAME meets WINGING IT WITH YOU

Tropes: fake dating, enemies to lovers, oh no one bed

Triggers: Open door explicit heat, profanity
Deadline: September 20th
Word Count: ~62k
Formats: Google Doc
What I’m looking for:
Character development, comments on setting/sensory descriptions, plot holes, pacing. And, as always, any genuine reactions you may have.

Devin wrote: "Hi all! Looking for betas. TIA.

Blurb:
Alex Reyes, a washed-up pop star, joins the queer dating show The One to resurrect his career. He’s planning to fake a perfect love story for the cameras—unt..."

Hello Devin,

I genuinely like your plot, just to understand… are these two straight men who discover they love each other on a dating show??? I think I will enjoy this 😅.

Are you perhaps open to the idea of a paid beta reader? I charge $1.00 per 1,000 words with a 7- 14 day turnaround. You can view other author’s reviews and detailed service information on my website: https://thebookconn.wordpress.com/

If you're open to it, you can reach me at: ikthebeardman@gmail.com I would be glad to discuss timelines, my process, and what you can expect in a final report.

Regards,
Ik

Devin wrote: "Hi all! Looking for betas. TIA.

Blurb:
Alex Reyes, a washed-up pop star, joins the queer dating show The One to resurrect his career. He’s planning to fake a perfect love story for the cameras—unt..."

Hi Devin,
This story wants to remind me of the show The Boyfriends. The blurb is already interesting. I'm Bassey and I offer experienced beta reading services. I am interested in reading your manuscript. I have a fast turnaround time of 2 weeks. 

My deliverables includes;
- Chapterly review
- feedback on your characters, pace, plot, tension, and suspense
- Honest in-line comments and reactions in the manuscript
- Full and detailed report of the full story
- I'll always answer any questions you have.
- I'll make corrections on any typos if you won't be offended by it
- I'll give opinions on how to improve your work if needed.

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If you’re interested in a paid service (with free first chapter read), you can reach me at basseyblessing118@gmail.com or reply under this thread, let's work together

Devin wrote: "Hi all! Looking for betas. TIA.

Blurb:
Alex Reyes, a washed-up pop star, joins the queer dating show The One to resurrect his career. He’s planning to fake a perfect love story for the cameras—unt..."

Devin
If you do not have enough beta readers already, let me know. I will gladly read for you. dmullnx@hotmail.com
Donna

Donna wrote: "Devin wrote: "Hi all! Looking for betas. TIA.

Blurb:
Alex Reyes, a washed-up pop star, joins the queer dating show The One to resurrect his career. He’s planning to fake a perfect love story for t..."

Just emailed you!