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Devin Greenlee Hi all! I’m looking for a beta reader for my novel. TIA!

FREE BETAS ONLY. All other inquiries will be ignored/deleted.

Title: HE’S (NOT) THE ONE
Details:
Adult MM Romantic Comedy
Dual POV
Word count: ~67k 
Comps: THE FAKE DATING GAME meets WINGING IT WITH YOU

Tropes: fake dating, enemies to lovers, oh no one bed

CW: Open door explicit heat, profanity
Deadline: September 20th
Format: Google Doc
What I’m looking for:
Character development, comments on setting/sensory descriptions, plot holes, pacing, and other plot-specific questions. And, as always, any genuine reactions you may have.

Blurb:
Alex Reyes, a washed-up pop star, joins the queer dating show The One to resurrect his career. He’s planning to fake a perfect love story for the cameras—until he’s undone by the only contestant who refuses to follow the plans.

Jaime Ford, a cynical bartender, is cast as the season’s villain. He sees straight through Alex’s performance and twists it to his advantage. After all—he’s just there for the paycheck.

When their staged connection (a flashy on-camera romance) turns into real chemistry, they must decide whether real love is worth getting in the way of everything they want from the outside world.


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