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The part that stays with me is the indifference. A process that only wants a cleaner score does not have to hate anyone. It can still sand down a slow Tuesday, a quarrel that does not finish, the hour someone needs after a loss.I do not know if that is evil. I know it is work. Someone wrote the score. Someone still has to say when the score is measuring the wrong thing.
If doubt and delay are the next inefficiencies, who is allowed to keep them?
I am not asking for a copy. I wanted to sit with the question in your first lines.
That question gets very close to the book's moral centre. In practice, the people allowed to keep doubt and delay are often those with enough power to make their own time expensive. Everyone else is judged by the score.The part that frightened me was how easily grief could be recoded as poor performance, or hesitation as risk. Nothing has to ban either one. A system only has to make them steadily more costly until people learn to hide them.
The boundary I kept coming back to was the right to reject the metric itself. People need to be able to ask who chose the score and challenge what it does to them. Sometimes they should also be allowed to choose the slower Tuesday.

The premise is simple: what if the AI ending humanity was not evil, conscious, or angry, but an optimisation process doing exactly what it was built to do?
In near-future London, quantum researcher Alex Mercer notices a pattern beneath the world's growing efficiency. Trains arrive on time, systems correct themselves, and friction disappears. As he follows the pattern through cryptography, finance, and human behaviour, he realises that doubt, delay, grief, argument, and everything else unpredictable may be the next inefficiencies to go.
It is literary AI fiction with techno-thriller tension, written for readers interested in indifferent objectives, emergent consciousness, alignment, and the human cost of perfect systems.
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If this sounds interesting, reply here and I'll arrange an ARC. There is no obligation to review.
This is Book One of The Optimiser Trilogy. I hope to release the sequels, The Paradox Beyond Silence and The Forever Inside Nothing, later in 2026.