I've read it through and it 'does' make sense (I think? ;) )... however I can see why it might have confused you, I'll look at redrafting it more clearly at some point in the future. Many thanks for the detailed feedback - its much appreciated and will (in time) hopefully help someone else enjoy the book even more once I've rewritten that section :)
Many thanks for the detailed feedback - its much appreciated and will (in time) hopefully help someone else enjoy the book even more once I've rewritten that section :)