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Hello!

I'm looking for free beta readers for my next novel, a MMM paranormal romantic thriller. This is second in a series, but it is not necessary to read the first book because each book has different characters. I'm almost finished with the manuscript but would like to start having the early chapters read.

Book title: Prism

Prisms were slippery squirrels. Trying to tail one was a special kind of hell, even for another prism. Something Deputy Sheriff Elian Nash is well aware of. He’s on the hunt for another prism, an assassin, who can manipulate color, disappear from surveillance, and make themselves nearly impossible to find.

Tad Ochao, a submissive werewolf with an anxiety disorder, wakes up next to a dead body, unaware he possesses dangerous information that someone is willing to kill for to keep buried. FBI agent Rafael Grullón is the werewolf determined to protect him.

Elian was important in Tad’s past. Rafael is important in his present. Tad hopes they’ll become important to each other, because he wants them both in his future. First, they must work together and protect each other. Their investigation isn’t only about catching a killer. It’s about surviving long enough to expose one.

Murders begin to multiply as the killer tries to erase the evidence and anyone who knows it exists.

That includes Tad.

You can email me at elizabeth.noble19@gmail.com or reply to this post if interested.

I do need you to confirm generative AI is not used in any way during the beta process.

Thanks for taking a look,

Elizabeth Noble

Hi Elizabeth! I’d be interested in beta reading *Prism*. The paranormal thriller elements and the MMM relationship dynamic sound really intriguing, and I’d be happy to start with the early chapters.

I can also confirm that I will not use generative AI in any way during the beta-reading process. I’d be glad to provide honest, reader-focused feedback on the characters, pacing, romance, plot, and overall reading experience.

If you’re still looking for beta readers, I’d love to participate.

Hi Elizabeth, I am definitely interested in being a beta reader for your book Prism. This idea of incorporating different genres into one story line, like paranormal romance, mystery, and thriller, is very interesting, and I got curious about the relationship between Tad, Elian, and Rafael. I would be glad to provide my opinions about the pace, characters, emotions and story development.

TOMMY wrote: "Hi Elizabeth, I am definitely interested in being a beta reader for your book Prism. This idea of incorporating different genres into one story line, like paranormal romance, mystery, and thriller,..."

Hello and thank you!

I have the first ten chapters on Story Origin (no fee for readers). You can make inline comments on the site or send me a separate word doc, whichever you prefer.

https://storyoriginapp.com/betacopies...