Thank you for taking the time to read Don't Wake the Dragon and for sharing your honest thoughts! I really appreciate you pointing out those specific moments that pulled you out of the story.
You are completely right to call out that limo and elevator scene—that was definitely a continuity slip on my end, and I apologize for making you have to reread it to figure out what was happening! I also appreciate the note on the "midnight blue" dress description and the confusion surrounding the triplets' genders. Keeping track of those details is so important, and sharp-eyed feedback like yours is incredibly helpful for me as I continue to grow and tighten up my writing.
I honestly love the comparison to a drugstore checkout novel. Sometimes a quick, entertaining escape is exactly the vibe I'm going for! Thank you again for giving the book a chance and for helping me improve.
Thank you for taking the time to read Don't Wake the Dragon and for sharing your honest thoughts! I really appreciate you pointing out those specific moments that pulled you out of the story.
You are completely right to call out that limo and elevator scene—that was definitely a continuity slip on my end, and I apologize for making you have to reread it to figure out what was happening! I also appreciate the note on the "midnight blue" dress description and the confusion surrounding the triplets' genders. Keeping track of those details is so important, and sharp-eyed feedback like yours is incredibly helpful for me as I continue to grow and tighten up my writing.
I honestly love the comparison to a drugstore checkout novel. Sometimes a quick, entertaining escape is exactly the vibe I'm going for! Thank you again for giving the book a chance and for helping me improve.
Best,
KJ Rose