Madelyn’s review of Shadow & Flame > Likes and Comments
Like
Thank you for taking the time to read and review my book! ❤️ I really appreciate the honest feedback. I completely understand what you mean about the ending feeling rushed and Ryn and Kade’s attraction feeling sudden. Interestingly, this is something I’ve heard from a few readers, even though personally I felt the pacing and their relationship developed naturally while writing it. But then again, if I wrote it realistically, the book would have never ended😂 had to speed it up a bit for a trilogy’s sake. But I’m always learning as I grow as a writer, and I genuinely appreciate you giving my story a chance!
back to top
date
newest »
newest »
message 1:
by
Hannah
(new)
Sep 28, 2026 05:25PM
Thank you for taking the time to read and review my book! ❤️ I really appreciate the honest feedback. I completely understand what you mean about the ending feeling rushed and Ryn and Kade’s attraction feeling sudden. Interestingly, this is something I’ve heard from a few readers, even though personally I felt the pacing and their relationship developed naturally while writing it. But then again, if I wrote it realistically, the book would have never ended😂 had to speed it up a bit for a trilogy’s sake. But I’m always learning as I grow as a writer, and I genuinely appreciate you giving my story a chance!
reply
|
flag
