Don’s review of Ashchronicles : Volume 1 Sanctuary 17 > Likes and Comments
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Thank you for the thoughtful review and honest feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed the pacing and the overall concept. Just a quick note: it seems you may have received an outdated version of the manuscript. I've submitted a corrected version, including fixes to some of the editing issues you mentioned. I'll look into why the older version may still be circulating. Thanks again for giving Ashchronicles a chance!
Ah, ok, having an older version definitely made a difference. I hope you track down those errant versions! I would have given four stars for sure. You definitely have something in the Ash Chronicles. I'd be interested in seeing how the series develops. A bit more conspiracy and intrigue, a little more on the characters and the history of what might have caused the catastrophe and I'd be hooked. I'm a huge fan of the Metro series of books so can see you have the start of something interesting here. I wish you success with the further chronicles!
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Thank you for the thoughtful review and honest feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed the pacing and the overall concept. Just a quick note: it seems you may have received an outdated version of the manuscript. I've submitted a corrected version, including fixes to some of the editing issues you mentioned. I'll look into why the older version may still be circulating. Thanks again for giving Ashchronicles a chance!
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Ah, ok, having an older version definitely made a difference. I hope you track down those errant versions! I would have given four stars for sure. You definitely have something in the Ash Chronicles. I'd be interested in seeing how the series develops. A bit more conspiracy and intrigue, a little more on the characters and the history of what might have caused the catastrophe and I'd be hooked. I'm a huge fan of the Metro series of books so can see you have the start of something interesting here. I wish you success with the further chronicles!