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message 1: by C.M. (new)

C.M. Teis Hello, I am new to this group. I joined because I am a new writer looking for 3-4 readers who can read and provide feedback and helpful criticism for my work. I am not sure how this goes, to be honest. So if you are interested, reply to this post, and I can get in touch with you.

The title is Crane Sorphis; it started as a short story but turned into a Novella.
My deadline for this would be two weeks since it's a Novella, but it's also flexible.
Thanks in advance!


message 2: by AJ (new)

AJ Clarke Can you give a word count, and perhaps a summary of the story and its hook, without giving away the crown jewels of the tale?


message 3: by C.M. (new)

C.M. Teis 28046 words. 111 pages, nine chapters, with epilogue.

On the Red Peace station, war is entertainment. Gladiators called the Burdened fight to the death while two rival nations tune in—and the peace holding them back is worth more than anyone suspects.

Crane Sorphis helps run the show. A Committee Minister with the power of life and death over every fighter in the arena, he has spent five years quietly collecting a secret meant to bring it all crashing down.

Today was supposed to be the day he released it.

Instead, the trap he never saw coming springs shut—and the people who set it have been patient in ways he cannot yet imagine. By the time Crane understands the true shape of the deception surrounding him, he will have lost nearly everything: his freedom, his position, the woman he sacrificed everything for.

Thanks for your response!


message 4: by C.M. (last edited Oct 21, 2026 09:56AM) (new)

C.M. Teis If anyone is interested in beta reading my manuscript, please email cmteis@proton.me. I am interested in a manuscript swap as well.

Thank you for your time in advance.


message 5: by Muneeba (new)

Muneeba C.M. wrote: "Hello, I am new to this group. I joined because I am a new writer looking for 3-4 readers who can read and provide feedback and helpful criticism for my work. I am not sure how this goes, to be hon..."

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