Eric’s Comments (group member since Jan 07, 2008)

Eric’s comments from the Black Romance group.

Makes sense. What's the ISBN #?

I'd be happy to. Send me an email with what you're sort of feedback you're looking for. My only question is if you've already published the book, what's the purpose of my feedback?

Romance.
For erotica, I'm not sure if a novel is the best format. As a man, there are no pictures. And even when you're looking for more cerebral stimulation, you don't need 300+ pages for it. The short story is probably more appropriate - something along the lines of Literotica.com would suffice.

With romance, you get to know the characters in more dimensions that length and cup-size. Hopefully (this a black romance group after all) they relate to you, experiences you've had or people you know have had in some way that adds verisimilitude. There's something to overcome that makes it worth 300+ pages and when they do, you can really enjoy having been along for the ride.

Sorry for being absent. I joined and noticed teh same thing. On the train now but I'll try to be more active now that I know there's life in the group.

I suggest Erica Simone Turnipseed. I read two of her books and loved them. I think this group would appreciate her writing.

A Love Noire, and Hunger