clairene ⍥’s Comments (group member since May 15, 2020)

clairene ⍥’s comments from the Always Write group.

desired? ö

now there are so many elements to this story uwu

but yeah suspension of disbelief is a thing i guess, and in real stories people are probably not going to think too hard about it as well

but how are they going to decide who is a good enough fighter, out of the huge military that is in larger countries like china, usa and also russia?

because they would have hundreds of thousands of people in the military for defense right, so choosing one "best fighter" is kind of difficult, in my opinion

the idea sounds really cool :D

just a question, but if we're adding the whole social inequality thing, so only one family in that whole country is going to be paid every month?

Ɖɼ⏶ɠ☼™ wrote: "so I think maybe what clairene was trying to say was like a board game version of SAO"

yeap yeap :)

Ɖɼ⏶ɠ☼™ wrote: "I stopped watching after the cliche anime guy falls on to anime girl and well




anywaaaays I stopped watching"

well i kinda stopped too XD but im referring to like maybe them getting stuck in a virtual land / they get sucked into it while playing? then they're forced to kill one another etc.

Potatos ♥ I have become one with the shrubbery ♥ wrote: "Okay so here's my current ball of ideas and potential


~A couple Hunger Games elements
~ It's like a game
~ That's obvious
~ But it's like a giant board game
~ Except there are traps everywhere
~ ..."

I like that this can encapsulate everyone.
What about incorporating virtual elements to it, so kind of like SAO if you guys have watched it.

i see the word advanced im already in

so something domination? hmm humans domination / animal takeover? we could do something like The Host..

or what if they disappear one by one for like an otherwordly experiment etc. hrm

what would the time period be ? dystopian future? because like humans / creatures could've genetically evolved and have an eye for their head, and crazy hands; and the technology is pretty much the same? or could be better?

im not really creative with initial plots, only with adding onto them >< ill try to think of something too, if you havent already but i gotta head to bed for now

Ɖɼ⏶ɠ☼™ wrote: "clairene ⍥ wrote: "if the main character has heterochromia, are we assuming that everyone else is going to have the same colour eye? Like everyone's blue, and main char has an multi coloured eye?"
..."

i see, so they're basically entirely like us except for the head / eye situation, and the hands!

okayy, hm what's the basic plot that you have thought about though? i think it's easier to make characters if we know what we're gonn do :')

if the main character has heterochromia, are we assuming that everyone else is going to have the same colour eye? Like everyone's blue, and main char has an multi coloured eye?

[[ do we start commenting already orrrr :o ]]

nah i'm just secretly psychic :p

hey Jay :>

can i just say this is such a wholesome group uwu

hi everyone, im clairene !!
you can call me clair, rene but just spell my name right please? hehe