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from the On Summer Break...RP group.
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Between the two of us, Kate, I'm the moderator. Please edit it Cassidy.
Sure.
Bayle wrote: "₴єaTнёFїёпd puǝıɟ wrote: "Mind if I have a house?"last and first name?"
I think it's possible that I can create threads, so I'd be able to make it myself.
I'm only telling you so you know. Your character has a history that can be difficult to reflect in her actions. By accurately relaying the history, you accurately relay the personality.
Oh, and its usually the next of kin that the child is sent to before a foster home.
Several things to address:If her father was sent to prison when she was eleven, then she would have been moved to a foster home.
The enlisting age for the army is eighteen, so her friend would more likely be older than her for him to have died in the field.
In order for her to be married to someone older than her, because most arms men serve a six month campaign before being allowed to return home, she would have to been given permission by her guardian.
Mind if I have a house?
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Alphonsine glanced at the sound of singing, brows raised. She sighed again softly, inspecting her surroundings.
Ally strode down the street, bag in hand. She'd only recently arrived and the scenes before her were new. Lips pursed, she pushed her glasses up further on her face in search of a library to hole up in as she searched for a place to stay that wasn't a hotel.
It's not really spam >.> It could be useful to other members.
Serial, not cereal.That's fine. You can edit her, I'm not stopping you if that's what you're insinuating.
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Hi ^-^
Ally is now done!
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↥ Cᴏɴᴛ'ᴅ Fʀᴏᴍ Aʙᴏᴠᴇ➥ Tʜɪs ᴛᴇᴍᴘʟᴀᴛᴇ ᴀɴᴅ ᴄʜᴀʀᴀᴄᴛᴇʀ ʜᴀs ʙᴇᴇɴ ᴍᴀʟɪᴄɪᴏᴜsʟʏ ᴄᴏᴍᴘɪʟᴇᴅ ʙʏ ғɪᴇɴᴅ
© Fɪᴇɴᴅɪsʜ Iɴᴄᴏʀᴘᴏʀᴀᴛɪᴏɴs
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Dɪsᴄʟᴀɪᴍᴇʀ: (view spoiler)
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lack of sibling rivalry, found their second daughter to be very peculiar. So, they thought that separating the two girls and presenting them with some form of exploitation of their differences would work well enough to present some form of rivalry.
Luckily, and unfortunately, it did.
«And every colour illuminates,
We are shining,
And we'll never be afraid again.»
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▆↜≋▐▐ ☰ The first true strain of any sort of sibling rivalry occurred during the migration of the family into Sweden.
Ally's parents had already begun to exaggerate the degree of Aiyanna's supposed perfection over the child that had never been truly wanted. It seemed that there would never be a true foot hold for the small child, who at this point was twelve years of age, to at least have over her elder sibling. So, what her parents had wanted enough out of Alphonsine came to life in the RV as they were camped in the forest. It was like any other camping that they'd done in the course of moving around France years prior. The two children were playing by the fire of the camp by which their mother was suing to cook up dinner.
The small interaction could have been a predictable prelude to the fight the would ensue. The younger of the two pulled the doll from the elder child's hands, claiming it to be her own. Ally knew at this point that her parents would not at any point come to her rescue, so by default of right as it went for them, she tossed the doll into the fire.
The reaction that was elicited by the fourteen year old was not exactly what the younger girl had dreamed of. The response was actually the simple turning of a head and the soft cry of, "Mom, Ally did something bad."
The instantaneous snapping up of heads from both adults was something to be afraid for Ally. The night she then spent alone in the RV was filled with the unpleasant chiming of laughter of the wonderful fun had by her older sibling and parents whilst she stayed indoors in something similar to a straight jacket.
It was at this point that Ally grew aware of how things were in her family, and pretty much how she wasn't what her parents had wanted. She knew initially that she wasn't exactly the best thing to ever happen to them, but her to not get so much as a word out in her defense was enough of a toll to shake the foundation of any part of her.
«And when I look into the future I see danger in its eyes
Hearts of hatred rule the land while love is left aside»
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▆↜≋▐▐ ☰ Ally knew her parents to be quite the bad decision makers.
When they decided that they would send her off to somewhere far, she had been more than a step ahead of them. There was no point to her staying with the family,as she never fit in nor did she seemed to be much loved by any member of the family. It was a disheartening thing, and was more than a little depressing for the subject of abuse and neglect.
She was sure to never speak with them again.
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Dulce-Olivia Delacroix
(☰) ╯x ┊❝ Mother / Alive ▍▍▍▍ ♥ 1 out of 10
Lucius Delacroix
(☰) ╯x ┊❝ Father / Alive ▍▍▍▍ ♥♥♥ 3 out of 10
Aiyana Delacroix
(☰) ╯x ┊❝ Sister / Confidential Information ▍▍▍▍ ♥♥ 2 out of 10
Caephas
(☰) ╯x ┊❝ Pet / Hedgehog ▍▍▍▍ ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ 10 out of 10
«I get frightened»
↥ Cᴏɴᴛ'ᴅ Fʀᴏᴍ Aʙᴏᴠᴇ➥ Tʜɪs ᴛᴇᴍᴘʟᴀᴛᴇ ᴀɴᴅ ᴄʜᴀʀᴀᴄᴛᴇʀ ʜᴀs ʙᴇᴇɴ ᴍᴀʟɪᴄɪᴏᴜsʟʏ ᴄᴏᴍᴘɪʟᴇᴅ ʙʏ ғɪᴇɴᴅ
© Aʟʟ Rɪɢʜᴛs Rᴇsᴇʀᴠᴇᴅ Fɪᴇɴᴅɪsʜ Iɴᴄᴏʀᴘᴏʀᴀᴛɪᴏɴs
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||☳|| [ Mᴇɴᴛᴀʟɪᴛʏ ]
⊱ Trait
⊱ Trait
⊱ Trait
⊱ Trait
⊱ Trait
«When we first came here, we were cold and we were clear.»
While the world around her is nice and everything, Ally isn't much drawn to it. She's very quiet and prefers to stay in her own zone which can become a problem. It's not like she's likely to admit that she's any bit shy; no, she just likes being alone. She's an introverted soul, and the lack of talking allows her to think better a good deal of the time. She also has a pretty bad way with words when she's speaking to people, and keeping quiet is a good way to avoid saying something she knows she'll regret. So, she restrains herself to be the girl that just watches in the corner and will later be telling everyone what they just did.
Ally can be very curious, even if she likes to stick to herself. When speaking with others, no matter how rare it is, she'll usually ask about them more than say anything about herself. She also has a game that she often used to play with her sister where they'd guess a person's life. The two would come up with an entire life story for a total stranger before the braver of the two would walk up and actually ask. Ally had a way of getting it right, or making them so far off that they could have been written in a novel. Of course, being the person that she is, Ally never took much pride in it because she believed her sister would be the better of the two of them at the game they invented. What others might see is her creative approach to situations, and how much her curiosity could be a factor to driving her out of her shell.
Another good thing to note about Ally is that she is quite the efficient worker. The speed by which she gets anything done is quite amazing, and her flexibility with her work schedule is also something to take note of. It's a feat that few can do when they have a ton of work and interfering factors that are really not what they want in their day, but Ally does it quite well. She doesn't usually have that added crap, but when it happens her schedule can be adjusted as easy as flipping a switch. Her sister would be the one to tell her how significant that trait is in her, only to be brushed off as an empty compliment. It's really a bad habit of hers to do that.
Ally is a person of expression and honesty. She wears her emotions on her like an outfit to be flaunted, and most of her lies fall flat. She doesn't have much experience with hiding anything, because her closest confidant was her sister. She's not used to having anything to hide, so she never found a way of practice to do so. Lying will never be her specialty, as she believes in telling the truth indefinitely. Even if someone lies to her, she's likely to telling them the truth, even if it hurts. Yeah, she has an issue with not telling the truth, to be honest. Should you get her to show emotions other than the static curiosity that she usually has, you'd see everything that she passes to get to whatever you wanted to get her to show. It's not the most appealing thought for her, but she's known people who take pleasure in her array of emotional display.
Loyalty and reliability are qualities that most people would look for in a partner or a friend, and Ally has both of those in a bundle. Loyalty is easily found in her, and she looks for that in others. Unfortunately, not everyone has given up their end of the deal in a relationship, and Ally has felt the pain that comes with that let down. She, however, would never do that someone else, and people usually depend on that factor to pretty much use her. She doesn't see this because she doesn't want to, and she lets herself be disappointed just for the few moments of a false relationship.
░▓░Adulation
✓ People watching; quite the activity to do when bored
✓ Guessing; it makes things fun, yah know?
✓ Writing
✓ Reading
✓ Children
✓ Flowers
✓ Night
✓ Owls
░▓░Abhorrence
✗ Attention; watching is better than being watched
✗ Mirrors; there's something in it that I don't want to see
✗ Thunder; it's a fear
✗ Sports; I'm not good at it
✗ Essays; I dun' like them
░▓░Fortitude
☰Cerebral☰
♦ Creativity
This is really the best part of her, and the only part she'd acknowledge if pushed to it.
♦ Observation
Ally has a knack for paying attention to certain details, and it comes in handy often.
☷Corporeal☷
♦ Disappearing
Ally has always loved to just fade into the crowd, it's even better as of late when she rocks back into her style.
░▓░Decrepitude
☰Cerebral☰
♢ Self Depreciation
Alphonsine likes pretty much nothing about herself. No, she doesn't. She especially doesn't like that she looks similar to her older sister, and has been living in her shadow for quite some time. She wants to make a name for herself and at the same time she hopes to just disappear from the crowd because she doesn't like anything about herself.
♢ Trust Issues
Ally has been let down by her family many times for the older sister that she could never amount up to. So, she doesn't trust much these days.
☷Corporeal☷
♢ Appearance
Ally hates her appearance, and it's a bit of a problem. She doesn't much like to be looked at, and her appearance - when she's not hiding- tends to draw attention. Sometimes, that attention isn't the best kind, as she has a sort of defenseless look to her.
♢ Strength
Ally isn't the strongest of people, and never has been. No matter how hard she is to work out, she isn't likely to develop any sort of strength. She's pretty much a weakling in about every single situation.
Σ||Eᴛᴇʀɴᴀʟ ↭ Wɪɴᴛᴇʀ
◤Aʟᴘʜᴏɴsɪɴᴇ Bʟᴀɴᴄʜᴇғʟᴇᴜʀ Dᴇʟᴀᴄʀɪᴏx◥
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▆↜≋▐▐ ☰ They say that the groundhog is supposed to see his shadow in order to tell when winter ends.
Alphonsine's parents often joked that the snow had blinded the groundhog on the day of Ally's birth. The couple had already had a girl of pure beauty two years before the second child was conceived. They hoped more than anything for the fetus inside to be a boy, to complete the two child picture of a family that had long since been dreamed about. The couple also had the idea of using a midwife, for the insurance that there child born into a Gypsy society would be integrated in the feel.
Their first child, Aiyanna, had been birthed in the same manner, with the addition of artificial maneuvering found in a simple needle to be injecting the female in the birthing process. Ally's mother had made the choice decision that she would bear through twelve hours of labor to see a son enter the world.
The midwife made her arrival into the small cabin nestled in the French woods outside of Paris along a highway, the cold rush of wind sending chills down the family's spines. She was an old woman, this midwife, but she held all the youth of a woman sixty years younger.
The couple was anxious to await the birth of their son and last child.
The labor lasted twelve hours, from the day before to eight in the morning of the next day. The sixth of March was an eventful day for the family of three. Aiyanna stood beside the midwife while her mother caught her breath from the excruciating pain and workout prior to a screaming child entering the world. A look of panic crossed both females' faces as they turned back to the woman who'd given birth to a daughter rather than a son.
"It's a girl," the midwife declared, and was faced with two stunned parents of the wailing baby girl.
The woman seemed flustered as she received the news, and the man was struck silent. The tense disappointment settled in around the four occupants of the cabin, and the early morning sun shone in through the windows as a turmoil began.
The midwife left three hours after a heated debate on the child being named as opposed to being murdered because of her gender. She'd argued against the bloodshed strong enough to make the parents name the child. They chose what they thought to be best for the child they hadn't exactly wanted, a name that not many would see appealing: Alphonsine Blanchefleur. Their last name was of no matter to them, as when people saw the child they would be sure of which Gypsy family they belong to.
And that was Alphonsine's start in the world, as an unwanted child.
«With no colours on our skin,
we were light and paper-thin»
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▆↜≋▐▐ ☰ By the time Alphonsine was eight, she learned what it meant to be invisible.
She had spent a better part of her early schooling years in the shadow of her sister, who was two years her senior. The two girls displayed amiable interactions in both public and private, but yet and still the younger girl never felt that the two were in any way equal to one another. It could simply be explained as jealousy, and the child psychiatrists did their best to have it said a better way.
It was evident that Ally was jealous of her sister, even her parents could see. However, they found it out that there children didn't display any sibling rivalry what so ever. Such a thing was supposed to be common in families, and yet they didn't experience it ever.
The parents hadn't totally gotten to appreciate the second daughter that had completed the ideal family that they wanted, albeit she was a girl. They, upon further examination of
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➥ Tʜɪs ᴛᴇᴍᴘʟᴀᴛᴇ ᴀɴᴅ ᴄʜᴀʀᴀᴄᴛᴇʀ ʜᴀs ʙᴇᴇɴ ᴍᴀʟɪᴄɪᴏᴜsʟʏ ᴄᴏᴍᴘɪʟᴇᴅ ʙʏ ғɪᴇɴᴅ© Aʟʟ Rɪɢʜᴛs Rᴇsᴇʀᴠᴇᴅ Fɪᴇɴᴅɪsʜ Iɴᴄᴏʀᴘᴏʀᴀᴛɪᴏɴs
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«Ａｓ ｍｕｃｈ ａｓ ｙｏｕ ｗａｎｔ,
ｋｎｏｗ ｔｈａｔ ｙｏｕ ｃａｎ'ｔ»
【 Aʟᴘʜᴏɴsɪɴᴇ 】 Bʟᴀɴᴄʜᴇғʟᴇᴜʀ Dᴇʟᴀᴄʀɪᴏx
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『 〓 』 Pronounced ➺ | ahl-FOHN-seh-ine| buh-lansh-FUH-loor | del-la-QWAH |
↬ Alphonsine is of Old German origin, and the meaning of Alphonsine is "ready for battle". It is the French feminine form of Alphonse.
↬ Blanchefleur is of French origin, and the meaning of Blanchefleur is "white flower".
↬ This ancient surname is of Roman (Latin) pre Cristian origins. It derives from the word 'crucis' meaning 'cross'. There are several potential origins, the most popular being that it was originally a habitational name for a person who lived at one of the many places called Cruc or Cros. These were named after a 'cross' which was set up to mark a tribal eeting place or perhaps a market, with little or no religious significance. In many cases particularly in Southern Europe, the surname was semi-religious. It denoted a lay person, that is to say, not a member of the clergy as they were celibate, who carried a cross in the festivals of the Christian Church.
【 Aʟʟʏ 】
The nickname was taken on by her older sister, who has since joined a rather confidential program and hasn't talked to her.
░▓░Gender Feminine ⇝ Female
♀┏━━━━━━━━━┓
Derived from the chromosome
┗━━━━━━━━━┛『xx』
░▓░Sexuality Ambisexual
[Relationship Status] Single
░▓░Age Seventeen ⇝ 17
░▓░Blood Type A+ ⇝ A Rh Positive
░▓░Place of Birth Outskirts of Paris ⇝ France
⊱ Nationalities French
⊱ Ethnicities French, Austrian, Welsh
░▓░Date of Birth March 6th ⇝ 8 AM
⊱ Zodiacal symbol ♓ ➠ Pisces ➠ (view spoiler)
«I'm not like other people»
Oᴛʜᴇʀ ɪɴғᴏʀᴍᴀᴛɪᴏɴ
░▓░Talent Creative ⇝ Writing, Photography, Painting
⊱ Hobbies Charcoal and Pastel Art, Writing, Taking Pictures
Ally has a tendency to write whatever she pleases, and it's usually something fictional. She doesn't believe that people can truly see the lesson of a story if it's real, as it only sticks for five minutes after the story has been told. Fictional stories seem to have a way of sticking to people as opposed to something that is real. When Ally paints, she has a zone of her own. She doesn't usually do much to converse with people on a regular basis, but painting gives her a means to shut out everyone without much problem. It also means that she usually gets her hands dirty and doesn't remember that she needs to clean up. Photography is great, as long as she isn't in the pictures that she's taking.
Tʜᴇ Bᴇɪɴɢ
▐▒ Face Claim Astrid Berges-Frisbey
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▐☸▒ As much as Ally wants to hide and disappear in the crowd, there is the matter of her appearance that can be rather compromising. Most of the time she finds a way to deal with it, and succeeds in getting people to overlook her for her more popular older sister. She doesn't believe it to be hard, as she doesn't believe herself to be very pretty, or noticeable.
Standing at a short five foot three, putting her at a lower vantage point than most. She isn't at all vexed by that, nor is she vexed by how little she weighs at a hundred and twenty-five pounds.She's indeed a tiny person, and she is well aware of it. She's come to embrace the lack of size that is the biggest divider between she and her sister. Alphonsine is ever so slender, with no distinct accent on any curve, although they're clearly there. Her lithe figure is among the many linking factors to her having any relation to the tall people of her family, including her sister and brother. Being the middle child isn't easy.
Tresses of dark brown hair that appear to be black at times cascade down to just past her shoulders. The strands are most commonly found to be incredibly curly, and this is solved by shoving it up into a bun or ponytail. Her hair frames an rectangular, ovoid face, which her tanned complexion is complimented by the tendrils. Her oculars are a pale blue hue, which can easily be corrupted by sunlight or lack thereof. It has a tendency to shift to a green coloring in darker lights, and nearly see-through like glass in brighter lights. Her lips are a deep rose hue, and stand out against her skin.
To focus on other things, one would go to her voice. Yeah, she doesn't favor the slightly gravelly tone of her voice. She's got very light French accenting and it can be quite appealing in some aspects, but she's not much to like herself. When she gets irritated or agitated in any way, her voice hitches up a couple octaves that's very noticeable to those who hear it. The same can apply for when she's overjoyed, but the difference in whether it's happy or not is clear in her expression.
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⊱ Hair Pigmentation Brown
⊱ Eye Pigmentation Pale Blue; green in dark lights, transparent in bright lights
⊱ Altitude 5 ft 3
⊱ Ponderosity 125 lbs
⊰⊱ Distinguishing Marks
▶ Glasses: She has a tendency to wear thick glasses that cover up her eyes
▶ Eyes: When she's not wearing her glasses, and you can actually see her face, she's got some pretty spectacular oculars on her.
||☳|| [ Sᴛʏʟᴇ ]
Ally has a style that is really a defense against being seen. She wears clothing that would forcibly make people shift their attention elsewhere. Sweatpants and over-sized shirts usually dispel any attention that she doesn't want at all. Her glasses, non-prescription mind you, also work as a deterrent from attention. On the rare occasions that she decides to wear something other than attention repellents, she will don jeans and a moderately sized shirt that will be quite the sight to see. For formal outings, a simple styled dress is likely to be found hugging her skin, added heels are used to improve height.
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