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Bonnie wrote: "I just wrote this!A secret smile,
a whispered greeting.
The only things I have
here in February.
An illicit glance,
a quick visit.
The only bursts of light
when the dark days arrive again.
Forev..."
it's beautiful
I likeyyyyI freaked out when I read on top of the world because that’s the title of my first attempt at songwriting
Bonnie wrote: "Wait I’ll re read it. That’s exactly why I need people to read it to spot these things 😂"😂
I had the same problem- but thankfully it’s all cut out now!
You switched tense in the third para from past to present? ‘cause it’s kinda confusing and I had to reread
