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*when you reply three months later*
Bonnie wrote: "I just wrote this!A secret smile,
a whispered greeting.
The only things I have
here in February.
An illicit glance,
a quick visit.
The only bursts of light
when the dark days arrive again.
Forev..."
it's beautiful
lmaoo
I likeyyyyI freaked out when I read on top of the world because that’s the title of my first attempt at songwriting
haha
yep! I changed the day limit to 1000 so it's safe now lol
Haha 30 days of inactivity
@Bonnie
Welcomeee!!!!!!!
Bonnie wrote: "Thanks :)"<33
Bonnie wrote: "Yep I did. I’ll now change that on the doc. THANK YOU!"🙃
Bonnie wrote: "Wait I’ll re read it. That’s exactly why I need people to read it to spot these things 😂"😂
I had the same problem- but thankfully it’s all cut out now!
Otherwise I really like it! I might add some more feedback later :)
And then changed it back I don’t know where
You switched tense in the third para from past to present? ‘cause it’s kinda confusing and I had to reread
ACTUALLY, IM KINDA FREE. INE SEC. I SHALL READ IT
Hehe
I will take that when I decide to sleep! It’ll actually be morning in five minutes
I shall read this when it is not 11:42 in the night. Aka tomorrow
Hiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!
