Patrick’s Comments (group member since Nov 21, 2013)

Patrick’s comments from the EII- Per. 7/8 group.

Ivan wrote: "Zia is trying to persuade sarah that she has powers. She is telling her that she is from a ancient family of people who do magic. She is starting to believe she has powers."

Sounds like some pathos, giving her facts. If I could have a power it would be teleporting.

Ivan wrote: "Zia is trying to persuade sarah that she has powers. She is telling her that she is from a ancient family of people who do magic. She is starting to believe she has powers."

Sounds like some pathos, giving her facts. If I could have a power it would be teleporting.

In my book, there was a person giving riddles and one the main characters, said that they were not riddles just stupid facts. The riddle giver got angry and tried to kill the character. So the character tried to persuade but it did not work. They tried to use pathos to make the riddle giver feel stupid. In the end it did not work.

My main character goes to the hoover dam and finds trouble. It was interesting because the author explained it well. He explained it well because he used descriptive words. On the other side, the dam dropped away like the world's most dangerous skateboard ramp, down to the river seven hundred feet below, and water that churned from the dam's vents.

The main character recently found out he has a step-brother, this caused him to get made fun of.