Callie Rae’s Comments (group member since May 27, 2025)

Callie Rae’s comments from the ♡ Teens Who Write ♡ group.

it’s well known that everyone is crazy at 3 am during those sleepovers when you want to stay up all night but your literally exhasuted so the crazy side of you starts to come out. this is just a chat that shows that, anytime of day. kinda like a crazy chat only x2 as much so

read the title if you want to know what this is about lol

so pretty much this is just like, what do you need to be doing and are procrastinating about vs what you want to be doing. like for example, homework; reading. you can write it out however you want just thought this would be fun.
mine is
need to do: write | want to do: nails

hmmm maybe like okay so i have a couple of people in my book that are reffered to as nicknames and at the beginning I swtich back and forth between the name and the nickname so you could switch back and forth between the old amnesisa name and the real name.

eg. “Brooklyn comes over to sit beside me and I give her a smile… (few sentences later) “hey Brooke, what are you doing tommorrow?”

or in your case “John comes over to sit beside me and I give him a smile… “Hey David what are you doing tommorrow?” but eventually you just fade out the name John.

also make sure to make it very clear that his name that he used to go by (John) is not his real name when you get to the ending. That way the readers know what your talking about.

Have a good day!!

its just all under this thread that way people can help with whatever you need. also welcome to the group!!!

hmmm that way is so creative but wouldn’t all of the islands or whatever be almost all the way the same instead of having a ton of jagged edges?

i know this is random but if you are writing a fantasy book and you want to make a map for it, take a piece of paper (preferably not just a piece of white because that won’t work as well. Lined or colored works best) and pour water over parts of it with space inbetween. Let it dry and once the paper has ink smudges, trace the edges of the ink smudges with a pencil and boom. Map. hopefully that makes sense

if you need help with your novel/story don’t be afraid to ask!!