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@allison omg yhh ^^ I know English, Italian and Spanish: here in Italy they make you learn LOTS of languages! in fact I’m also learning Latin at school and probably I’m going to study German or French too😅 thennn my family sometimes speaks the language of my island and (since I hear it almost everyday) I perfectly can understand it, but I can’t talk in it😭girl trust me, learning languages is sooo fun! my favourite one must be English, but since you already speak it I’m going to suggest you to learn Spanish first ;) the grammar is pretty easy to understand‼️
@allison well I’m writing it in Italian so it’s kinda difficult to make it in English😭100% Soledad is gonna end up with Caleb: it’s like a childhood best friends to rivals to lovers. he’s practically smitten since chapter 1, but she’s an emotionless baddie that doesn’t want to show her emotions (…ugh. I hate this type of characters🙄🙄)
then I was thinking about making Zayn single (I already hate that guy idk why)
aaand Hypatia I don’t really know actually. maybe someone in book 2?🤔
@allison OMG YOUR STORY LOOKS LIKE A FUSION BETWEEN PERCY JACKSON AND SCHOOL BUS GRAVEYARD‼️‼️ SO COOL!!!! I absolutely love it, def gonna read it ;)
I already kin your mc honestly😗
mine’s a fantasy with a touch of romance! there are four mcs that live in a world where art is power ^^so basically there’s Soledad that is a forger, Caleb is a musician, Zayn is a persuader and Hypatia doesn’t belong to any category :)
in chapter one I’ve just introduced Soledad, Caleb and Zayn, but in chapter two Hypatia is going to join them.
I plan to make them realise that the system of the city (Artopia) is corrupted in a few chapters and I’d like to make them start a revolution🤭
I’m already planning book two too!! the world building is gonna change COMPLETELY. in fact there is going to be a new city: Sciepolis, where science is the main focus.
book three? I’ve got some vague ideas…maybe a war between the two cities? I still don’t know though🤷🏻♀️
mine’s a fantasy with a touch of romance! there are four mcs that live in a world where art is power ^^so basically there’s Soledad that is a forger, Caleb is a musician, Zayn is a persuader and Hypatia doesn’t belong to any category :)
in chapter one I’ve just introduced Soledad, Caleb and Zayn, but in chapter two Hypatia is going to join them.
I plan to make them realise that the system of the city (Artopia) is corrupted in a few chapters and I’d like to make them start a revolution🤭
I’m already planning book two too!! the world building is gonna change COMPLETELY. in fact there is going to be a new city: Sciepolis, where science is the main focus.
book three? I’ve got some vague ideas…maybe a war between the two cities? I still don’t know though🤷🏻♀️
I’m actually in a pretty decent situation… (me when I lie)okay, no, I js revised chapter 1 and corrected some mistakes. I’ve also added a few things because I feel like it’s way too short!
then I started writing chapter 2 too🤭
