Kayleigh’s Comments (group member since Jul 04, 2014)

Kayleigh’s comments from the Write a book group.

Hi x

It's good I like sorta has the selection, kinda of feel with the tests, I like the story though I wanna know why the world is using test to segregate people? Overall it's great x

Thanks it's a long away from publishing just about finished the next chapter so that will be on here soon x

I love to read what you written, and don't put yourself down, we always think our own work isn't very good,it's the reason I posted mine I didn't think it was very good, until you guys read it and said it was x

Thanks I will review and work on it...

Haven't started it yet thank for liking it. I wasn't sure worked yet, I really don't whether she should have more time with Alexander first?

Ok try this link, it does have swearing in it but not muchhttps://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...

https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/... this is the link as I look at it, it's the first draft,and I don't know if it comes across as too fast in pace.

On my writing section of my profile not sure where it's goes after that it's called runaway.

Hi I'm kayleigh, I'm fairly new to Goodreads and a newbie to the group's. I've recently started writing which I've uploaded onto here but unsure how I go about getting feedback, it's just the first chapter but to me it's the most important. Any advice you guys could give me would be great thanks