J.’s Comments (group member since Jan 21, 2024)

J.’s comments from the Free book editing/beta reading group.

Recently completed Detective Mystery. Light-hearted but enough twists to keep you guessing. The detective's name is Able Body and he's fighting an existential crisis.

The manuscript is in good shape. I need another set of eyes to look for plotholes, pacing, and clarity. Here's the blurb:

Able Body, a small-town private detective is learning as he goes. When he is lured into helping an ex-girlfriend find her husband’s killer, his ventures into criminal activities nearly cost him his life.
Able partners with his old boss, a retired insurance investigator, and an impatient police lieutenant to help him solve the mystery.
The adventure and excitement of a murder investigation teach him more than he expects to learn. It sets him on a new course. Leaving him to wonder if he can return to the low-key, small-town lifestyle.

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