Aksh1ta’s Comments (group member since Dec 21, 2025)

Aksh1ta’s comments from the Free book editing/beta reading group.

Hi.
If you're still up for editing for free, my manuscript (about 10k words) could use some. I have to submit it for a contest but am unsure how to go about editing it. I'd like feedback strutural and stylistically.
My story is about 2 boys who've gone through a lot of pain and are going down a path of revenge. Throughout the story, the two learn that there's more to the other than they know and learn to find their place in the world. It's mostly relastic fiction, with a very small touch of fantasy. I need it done by December 30th. If that doesn't work, please tell me. Thanks!