Lorenzo’s Comments (group member since May 28, 2025)

Lorenzo’s comments from the Free book editing/beta reading group.

Hi there,
Thank you so much for your quick response. I have sent you an email.

Hi Julie,
Many thanks for your message. I have sent you an email!

Hayley wrote: "Hello Lorenzo

I'm interested feel free to drop me a mail heathereadings@gmail.com"

Hi Heather, thank you for your interest. Before I send anything, could you let me know a bit about your experience as a beta reader or editor? Have you worked on similar genres before? Also, how do you prefer to work — chapter by chapter, or full manuscript? Thanks again!

Looking for a beta reader, maybe a proof reader/editor for my psychological drama of love, obsession, and the haunting weight of secrets.

"For All the Times I Tried to Say Goodbye" is a haunting psychological drama that explores the blurred lines between love, obsession, and redemption, set against the moody coastlines of Scotland and the sun-soaked shores of the Mediterranean.

In a small, wind-lashed town on the Scottish coast, Ben lives a solitary life, carving flesh and bone by day as a fishmonger and retreating to the shadows of his thoughts by night. But when he crosses paths with a man whose world seems equally fractured, their connection sparks a web of secrets and unspoken promises that will change both their lives forever.

As their relationship deepens, the past begins to unravel, bringing with it the echoes of long-buried memories and the haunting whispers of what might have been. Trapped between the desire to move forward and the fear of confronting their darkest truths, they must each decide how far they are willing to go to escape the ghosts of their pasts.

Perfect for readers who appreciate slow-burning tension, introspective prose, and richly atmospheric storytelling, For All the Times I Tried to Say Goodbye is a meditation on the quiet, often painful complexities of the human heart.

Looking for a beta reader, maybe a proof reader/editor for my psychological drama of love, obsession, and the haunting weight of secrets.

"For All the Times I Tried to Say Goodbye" is a haunting psychological drama that explores the blurred lines between love, obsession, and redemption, set against the moody coastlines of Scotland and the sun-soaked shores of the Mediterranean.

In a small, wind-lashed town on the Scottish coast, Ben lives a solitary life, carving flesh and bone by day as a fishmonger and retreating to the shadows of his thoughts by night. But when he crosses paths with a man whose world seems equally fractured, their connection sparks a web of secrets and unspoken promises that will change both their lives forever.

As their relationship deepens, the past begins to unravel, bringing with it the echoes of long-buried memories and the haunting whispers of what might have been. Trapped between the desire to move forward and the fear of confronting their darkest truths, they must each decide how far they are willing to go to escape the ghosts of their pasts.

Perfect for readers who appreciate slow-burning tension, introspective prose, and richly atmospheric storytelling, For All the Times I Tried to Say Goodbye is a meditation on the quiet, often painful complexities of the human heart.