Felicite’s Comments (group member since Jun 05, 2015)

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Hello! My name is Felicite D. Lilly and I cried, pushed, screamed and loved out the work Demons Demons: A Hunter's Novel, Book 1. Would love for you to read it.
Excerpt:
After being escorted out by guards in the middle of the Council meeting, Anie and I strolled amicably down the street.
“I hate you right now.” Anie said. Maybe amicable was too strong a word.
“I’m not the one who stood up and lied to the Council. Why’d you do it? You knew what you were risking!”
“I did it because, apparently, I’m a raving lunatic with a death wish. And maybe because a guy showed up at my house and paid me a ton of money to keep you out of trouble.”
It had to be Azrael. If it wasn’t him, I had no idea who it could be. No one cared enough anymore to keep me out of trouble like that. The only one I could think of, besides Anie, was Az.
“Who was this mysterious man?” I asked her sounding as alarmed and interested as I should when news like that reached me.
“That’s just it. I have no idea. I think he was a Demon, but that’s all I got. I don’t know what he looked like or what level, exactly anyway, he is. But he’s gotta be high up. I’ve never blanked out on someone like that before.”
It was definitely Az then. There was no other possibility. Right?
“How much did he pay you?”
“Enough.”
“We’ll see about that.” I hated he had paid her. She was risking her life. There was not enough money in the world for that.
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