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(group member since Jul 22, 2015)
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from the Keeping the Clans Alive {An Advanced Warriors RP} group.
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We alllll suck at this! I'm not giving myself an expected time to return, because I've done that three times and failed each time! So I'll be back once I feel better.
Hi guys. I'm really sorry I haven't been on and done replies yet. I've got a ton of RL issues to deal with right now.
I would say not, because the Clans wouldn't come across an animal with tusks (ie. ivory). We can see what Ari thinks of it though.
@Leopardmint - APPROVED!@Shiningpaw - APPROVED! But just a head's up: Aspen- is a taken prefix in ShadowClan, but if Aspenfall is deceased then just note that please. if Aspenfall is meant to be open, please change his name. Mistpaw's name needs to be changed, as Mist- is also a taken prefix. Perhaps Fogpaw? Thanks!
Hey hey guys. Congrats Demi for being the newest mod!Hope to do my replies later this week. Sorry for the hold up!
Clan Announcement
Stormpaw has passed on to StarClan due to the injuries she sustained. Flamepaw has only just discovered/reacted to this, and it is happening in the Medicine Cat Den.
The Medicine Cat (pending: Streamlily) will be needed to talk to Flamepaw, and tell the deputy (Lostbreeze: Demi) of Stormpaw's passing.
Free to Mentor
Websplash || RiverClan || Tempus
Blizzardwhisker || RiverClan || Tempus
Cinderstorm || ThunderClan || Tempus
Flamewhisker || ThunderClan || Tempus
Galestorm || WindClan || Demi
Heatherleap || WindClan || Tempus
Lostbreeze || WindClan || Demi
Need a Mentor
Duckpaw || RiverClan || Raya/Maddy
Nutpaw || RiverClan || Tempus
Ravenpaw || ShadowClan || Tauriyel
Stealthpaw || ThunderClan || Stealth
Snowpaw || WindClan || Tempus
Current Mentor-Apprentice Pairs
RiverClan
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ShadowClan
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ThunderClan
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WindClan
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Hi all, the mentor-apprentice list will be going here for the time being. I'll be posting it within the next few hours. Let me know if any mistakes are made. I'll need everyone to tell me whose cats need a mentor or an apprentice, as the last list has unfortunately been lost.
@The Manga Warrior, we have laid out the reasons in Needed Cats. Please go there and tell me anything you do not understand, and Demi may be able to help further, as her explanation was likely more helpful than mine.
@Juniperpaw - I will not delete this profile until you say that you have it saved somewhere, but I cannot approve this profile due to the reasons laid out in Needed Cats.Shiningpaw -
--Shining- is a prefix already used in ThunderClan, so you'll have to change Shiningpaw's name again please.
--Do you intend to make Ospreyclaw yourself? There are mentors open to apprentices already in ThunderClan, and generally it would be preferential to have a taken cat as mentor.
--I personally would not see "including everyone" as a strength - just pointing that out. Perhaps being "socially aware" or some variant of it? Also, this is the opposite of "forgets about others", really.
--Belief is belief in StarClan/Dark Forest, generally.
--You need to write some biography in her history, rather than flashbacks. You can use both, but we must have at least a few lines in each section above or beneath the flashback. For Kitted, you can describe how she was treated by her littermates, perhaps why she likes to include everyone. For Apprenticed, describe how her training has gone, what she excels in and how her mentor helps her.
Demi offers a far better explanation, and has also pointed out the issue with the non-updated needed ranks above. I will update those today and make all the corrections and additions needed.I also cannot approve of any Important Claims (ie. Med Cat Apprentice and above) in Character Approval. It has to be done with the template in Important Character Claims first, I'm afraid.
It should do - there's a template there, and you cannot make an important claim until you post there. You can use the template and work on filling out the template while it's closed.
Go to Important Character Claim and read through what you need to do there! It's currently closed, but I'm going to try and push for the current batch of claims to go through.
