April’s
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(group member since Jan 28, 2016)
April’s
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from the Theme Projects 2016 group.
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In addition to your interesting and creative hook, I also liked how you provided direct quotes from the book and then described why it is relevant and how it proves your claim. That made it really clear as to how the books have a similar theme with your partnership book THE 5TH WAVEEVEVEVEVEEEEE.
I like how you were able to tie in pieces of art that seem like they may not be related to your theme but really are. The descriptions are written with a lot of detail describing what it looks like, the connection to your book's theme, and the reasoning for why it connects to the theme.
I really like how you described the piece of art in depth and then added a connection to explain how it is relevant to the theme of your book.
