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This task is task 3. The outline that we can use in this task is:1.Introduction
2.Theme in text one and the literary elements used to show this theme.
3.Theme in text two and the literary elements used to show this theme.
4.Conclusion
This task is task 2. The outline that we can create to make more easy this task is by using 4 steps, like:1.Introduction-Adopting a healthier lifestyle
2.Reason #1-Write evidences from the text #1
3.Reason #2-Write evidences from the text # 2
4.Conclusion
This task is task 1, the tpoci that I will be listen to is Madame Marie Curie as a successful scientist.4 topics that Ican related with this topic are:why make Madame Marie Curie important? how her acts impact the science? what was her actions as a scientist? what sehe discovered about science? we need to take notes on while being read by using techniques to know the most important things about the topic like: who , what,when,where and why!!!!
I agree with the quote "In the dark time, the eye begins to see" by Theodore Roethke ,this means that sometimes when we have problems in that moment we begin to think about many things in a better way more clearly that can us help to solve that problems.The two literature that prove my interpretation of this quote which I am agree are: Romeo and Juliet by William Shakespeare and The Scarlet Letter by Nathaniel Hawthorne.In the Romeo and Juliet's book we can saw a lot of problems that this couples had, because already their familys were enemies ,trying to separated Romeo from Juliet. In that moment they thought about their true love and they decided fight for their love dont matter what the other people say or if some people continue trying to separated them. This book really connect with this quote "In a dark time, the eye begins to see", wich mean in the difficult times whe can really think and analyse better the things.The Scarlet letter's book is about a women "Hester" who decided have their baby "Pearl", dont matter what the community said for be a single mother and adultery. This was difficult for her because some years after she could find Pearl's father who named was "Dimmesdale". This is connect with the quotation because after many times seeing how Hester and Pearl were mistreated at the end Dimmesdale decided to confesed that he was Pearl's father, so Hester and Pearl had to face difficult moments to Dimmesdale can realize what was better to do.
Frederick Douglass was an African American of the 19th century. Furthermore he was a slave that wanted learn many important things for instance: read and write. Douglass consequently while he was a children the masters separated to him from his mother, when he had about seven years.Generally the slaves were dehumanize and their rights were deny, however Douglass talked with the master's wife to that she teach to him how read and write. Nevertheless he was a slave he work very hard to abolish the slavery and that all the people were equal and that their rights were respected by the other. In conclusion Frederick's life was a testament to courage and persistence that continues to serve as an inspiration to those who struggle in the cause of liberty and justice.
Frederick Douglass was an African American of the 19th century. Furthermore he was a slave that wanted learn many important things for instance: read and write. Douglass consequently while he was a children the masters separated to him from his mother, when he had about seven years.Generally the slaves were dehumanize and their rights were deny, however Douglass talked with the master's wife to that she teach to him how read and write. Nevertheless he was a slave he work very hard to abolish the slavery and that all the people were equal and that their rights were respected by the other. In conclusion Frederick's life was a testament to courage and persistence that continues to serve as an inspiration to those who struggle in the cause of liberty and justice.
Kimberly wrote: "Sam was discriminated against by many people in the way they believed none of the things that Sam said. This was terrible because no one hoped to Sam for all the lies that he made.A example that no..." yeah nanito manuelito!!! that was terrible because nobody want to believe all the things that Sam said.
i dont like that u tell me Nicolasaa...no me digas asi manuelaaaaaaaaaaaa lolzx
Sam was discriminated against by many people in the way they believed none of the things that Sam said. This was terrible because no one hoped to Sam for all the lies that he made.A example that nobody believed Sam was when he saw his father was taken by 2 very strange man who allegedly may have abducted his father. This was terrible for him, because he told his a friend and his mother, but unfortunately no one believed in Sam. They said they stop lying. This cite show us how Sam's friend don't believe to him "I have to say,this is a good one.It's one of your best stories ever".Sam feel very bad because nobody want to believe to him.
One ethical problem in my independent reading book called Missing by M. Sobel Spirn is that the main character, Sam is a child who lives alone with his father since his mother separated from his father.I think this is very hard for Sam to see their parents separate. From the time his parents separated and he change their way of being. Sam began to lie endlessly, there was a day that stop telling lies.When he forgets to do their homeworks, Sam said to the teacher many false stories about why he cannot do their homeworks.One of this stories was that he and his parents were on vacation to California where he spent a terrible earthquake , saying that made that he cannot do their homeworks.The lies really are terrible because that destroy the confidence you can have some people, it is best to always tell the truth although its sometimes may be painful.
One ethical problem in my independent reading book called Missing by M. Sobel Spirn is that the main character, Sam is a child who lives alone with his father since his mother separated from his father.I think this is very hard for Sam to see their parents separate. From the time his parents separated and he change their way of being. Sam began to lie endlessly, there was a day that stop telling lies.When he forgets to do their homeworks, Sam said to the teacher many false stories about why he cannot do their homeworks.One of this stories was that he and his parents were on vacation to California where he spent a terrible earthquake , saying that made that he cannot do their homeworks.The lies really are terrible because that destroy the confidence you can have some people, it is best to always tell the truth although its sometimes may be painful.
Tom, Becky and Huck went in search of new adventures they lied to their parents saying they would be in another house, but really they were going to a cave in search of fun. While the hours passed they were very happy in the cave trying to find a treasure but their parents were worried because it was late and their children dont returned to home. After that the childrens were lost in the cave and many people were looking for them.Tom, Becky and Huck were scared because they were lost, but while they continued walking they found the treasure full of money. When their parents could find they were very happy to see their children and the children were very happy to see their parents again and have lots of money with them.The children said to many people who find a treasure and all persons were very surprised.
Tom, Becky and Huck went in search of new adventures they lied to their parents saying they would be in another house, but really they were going to a cave in search of fun. While the hours passed they were very happy in the cave trying to find a treasure but their parents were worried because it was late and their children dont returned to home. After that the childrens were lost in the cave and many people were looking for them.Tom, Becky and Huck were scared because they were lost, but while they continued walking they found the treasure full of money. When their parents could find they were very happy to see their children and the children were very happy to see their parents again and have lots of money with them.The children said to many people who find a treasure and all persons were very surprised.
Manuel wrote: "Kim!!!! My super girl!!!!As i was reading your post i was just wondering my love how you'll compare your life with the author's point of view????? and also do you think been friend is a need or a ..."
The way that I compare my life with the author's point of view is very important have super good friends like you in the life of every person because the friends are like angels that always try to help you when you have some problems or you feel bad, therefore I think that we need friends to can survive, all the people need someone to trust.
xau nanito bechoo!!!=P
Justine wrote: "AH KIMBERLY - CITATION! CITATION! CITE IS THE VERB! MI CORAZON!!!Ok, now that I have gotten that out of the way, let's look at what you wrote! This is a very sweet citation, and a lovely moment f..."
Tom acted in a good way front to Becky because he fall in love with her in this way He wanted to show all their feelings to Becky. Really he is a good boy but as he neglect the school and their obligations to seek new adventures his aunt tell to him bad boy to that he change this behavior.
The way that I compare my life with the author's point of view is very important have super good friends like you in the life of every person because the friends are like angels that always try to help you when you have some problems or you feel bad, therefore I think that we need friends to can survive, all the people need someone to trust.xau nanito bechoo!!!=P
The way that I compare my life with the author's point of view is very important have super good friends like you in the life of every person because the friends are like angels that always try to help you when you have some problems or you feel bad, therefore I think that we need friends to can survive, all the people need someone to trust.xau nanito bechoo!!!=P
Tom acted in a good way front to Becky because he fall in love with her in this way He wanted to show all their feelings to Becky. Really he is a good boy but as he neglect the school and their obligations to seek new adventures his aunt tell to him bad boy to that he change this behavior.
The cite "You're a very good friend",I think is beautiful because this cite is about how a friend helps another friend. Becky said this cite to Tom when she inadvertently tore the book of the teacher and the teacher was asking who tore the book but like Tom is a good boy, he said to the teacher "I did it."This show a wonderful friendship.
I see the movie and never find a character name Jacob jijijii, but i like your post because you show a lot of creativity. how she felt when the vampire girl was trying to monitors to her ???
