Annabelle’s Comments (group member since Oct 27, 2010)

Annabelle’s comments from the We Write group.

New piece! I wrote it after I discovered one of my closest friends had an eating disorder.

The World
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

I miss Kaylin so much too… )': And the brownies… jeez, this is making me so sad.

Recently, I happened to be involved in what I believe is one of the most amazing miracles I've ever read about or witnessed anywhere. This is my take on the experience, and I really hope you enjoy it.

Miracles
Description: Last September, my friend Richard took a gun and shot himself in the head, killing himself. That's what they told me. But they were wrong.
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

I made a decision to post excerpts from my unposted novels-in-progress on Goodreads so that they're available for you to read and review. I'll try to provide background, but it's possible they won't necessarily be in chronological order. So far there should be no problems since there're only three excerpts and none of them are from the same novel, but just for future reference.

So, enjoy ;)

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

I'm going to second what Kelsie said… I love you, Ama! <33 And you are most definitely amazing :)

Oh, how lovely!

Chapter 3 of Perfection is up!! This one is kind of short too, but Chapter 4 is quite long, so prepare yourself. ((:

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Okay, I want to clarify why this chapter was written from Aria Kira's point of view. I did this not because she is an extremely important character (although she does show up again) but because I felt it was important that the reader gets a perspective that is not Dom's in this chapter. While the majority of the story will be told by Dom, there will be sections told by other characters, and I want to be clear that I do do this for a reason.

Chapter 2 of Perfection is up!! I'm sorry that it's so short, but I'll make up for it. Really.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Oh my goodness, guys. I have finally, finally, finally posted the extremely short prologue of one of my novels-in-progress. You have to read it. Like, right now. And I am dead serious. Go. Now.

Perfection
Description: Dominic Andrews was the guy you wanted to be. He was a senior in high school and captain of the football team. He could have any girl he wanted. That's why it was such a big deal when he chose Jalene Adams, a quiet girl who studied hard and rarely looked up. He was the perfect guy. Perfect hair. Perfect eyes. Perfect body. Perfect everything. And then one day, Jalene goes missing. No one knows why. All Dom knows is that he has to find her. And if he happens to meet a French model named Charla, well…who knows what could happen? It's a journey that will ultimately teach him what perfection, and all the flaws behind it, really is.
Link: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

You know you're a writer when you're in the middle of writing an essay for English and get an amazing idea for a novel. You proceed to abandon your essay and start your novel.

Fortunately, I love Kelsie so I forgive her. ((:

Fortunately, I have recently read the story that Ama and Kelsie are co-writing, so I can honestly say that it is amazing and I am glad that Kelsie is (supposedly) writing more.

Fortunately, I know Peeta as well. But I'm with Ama: I don't know him as well as Kelsie does. ((:

Unfortunately, it is obvious that Victoria has not read The Hunger Games.

Beautiful! These are both absolutely beautiful!

You know I love this, Kels! ((:

And of course it's all right, Kelsie. ((: It's no big deal. :DD

Hello! (((:

Stack overflow is really annoying…especially because usually when you get it, it happens multiple times in a row.

Granted, but then your computer shuts down and won't turn back on. Ever.

I wish I understood the concept of arrays better…

I love it, of course.

But, just saying, did you HAVE to use the name Andrew?

All right, sorry about that. But WHY? That's the one thing I can't get over…

But it really is a wonderful story, so I forgive you. ((((:

Fortunately, I agree with you. ((: