Bryan Shields Bryan’s Comments (group member since Jan 11, 2011)


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Feb 14, 2011 12:38AM

50x66 Teri,

I wouldn't be able to give this a very good review.

The plus sides are: It is well written, there are just a couple misspellings and missing letters here and there; The way you relate personal experience and analogies are helpful in making the concepts tangible to the reader; I also think the questions in the worksheet are clever in getting the reader to identify their own behavior patterns/responses. There are certainly absolute truths about behavior in this that everyone should know.

It goes without say: you're not obligated to read or review my novel and I hope you do find someone who can give you an outstanding review for the work you have put into it.
Feb 13, 2011 03:38AM

50x66 Teri,

I'd like to give you a chance to clarify something before I form a review. Your chapters on Sami and Hucha / Getting Rid the Junk are very contradictory.

If energy is neither good nor bad, then there's no reason to get rid of Hucha. And if, as you say, the Hucha energy doesn't serve and that isn't bad, then it doesn't matter if it's gotten rid of or not. So, devote a whole chapter removing something that's cumulative effect is nil? What's to say a person doesn't enjoy layers of "hucha"?

Actually, if you take it to the furthest conclusion, there's no point to the book at all because none of those things are issues to address since it's neither good or bad. So why am I buying the book? --- That's what I would ask as a reader.
Jan 31, 2011 09:12PM

50x66 Yeah, I'll do some reviews. My e-mail/snail mail address are listed in the other thread.
Jan 31, 2011 09:11PM

50x66 bshields@razorbackgfx.com

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Jan 25, 2011 10:24PM

50x66 E-mail or snail mail address?
Jan 23, 2011 09:01PM

50x66 As far a Goodreads goes, you can offer a significant portion of the book for free as a preview. That helps review swappers by cutting down the cost of sending printed copies to one another. I personally wouldn't need to read the entire book to give a review on it.
Jan 23, 2011 08:58PM

50x66 I'm all about the review exchange but it seems to be an easier thing to discuss, rather than do. Either that or I keep landing in the wrong crowd. I'm not sure which :)