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Nov 17, 2013 06:38PM

42935 Teffal followed the others trying not to breathe that much. She looked up to see her sister already three feet ahead of everyone else. Normally she would have called out to her to wait for them but she decided against opening her mouth with all of the dead bodies around.
Sep 20, 2013 11:49PM

42935 "So we have to go through there? Even if they dont move I dont think we can push all of those bodies aside to get to the exit." Teffal was saying as she watched her sister cautiously lower herslef into the hole in the wall.
Sep 02, 2013 04:08PM

42935 Eventually it started to widen out and after a sharp turn led them to a dead end. What was suprising was all of the computer equipment that was in the room. They all worked and on one screen was a map of where they had been. Another screen had a video of them going through the tunnel. The wall behind the computers was filled with layers of pictures of peoples faces. There was a large hole in both the right and left wall which were parallel to each other. Just as Zelda cleared the entrance of the room a skelton came down from the ceiling and landed at her feet. "Last stop! Find out how to get out of this room or you end up going into a hole in a wall." Then it went quite and Teffal kicked it away, more than a little bit shocked. Zelda went over to one of the holes and looked in. She covered her nose and mouth and backed away in disgust. "Um guys, theres like a ton of dead corpse in there. It looks like it goes on forever."
Aug 09, 2013 07:15AM

42935 (So do you have an ideafor whats at the end of the tunnel because i do if you don't!)
Teffel joined the others and made sure her sister wouldn't see the head of the spider when she came into the hole. "I really hope this doesn't get smaller like in Alice in Wonderland" She laughed out loud thinking of how they would all have to crowd into such a small space. Zelda walked cautiously around the body of the dead spider and lowered herself into the hole as well.
Mar 21, 2013 09:34PM

42935 "Yes. Get your ass over here and kill this damn thing. I hate spiders especially giant ones." Zelda said while she poked at it with her sword.
Jan 28, 2013 08:29AM

42935 "Ew gross!" Teffal said sticking one of the spider's remaining legs with her sword.
Jan 09, 2013 04:53PM

42935 The spider made a sound that was close to a scream. It limped away from zelda and went for Derek
Dec 24, 2012 12:11AM

42935 Teffal grabbed some rocks and started throwing them at it making sure to stay far away from the spider. Zelda cut one of the spiders back legs with her sword.
Dec 10, 2012 07:29AM

42935 Zelda walked slowly behind it ready to attack from there/
Nov 11, 2012 12:58PM

42935 The spider came out and the cat jumped back into Teffal's open bag. "Okay who's going to kill it?" Teffal said backing up as it came at her.
Oct 31, 2012 06:51AM

42935 "Well I'm totally confused here so how about we just use my cat?" Teffal said opening up her book bag and pulling out a disgruntled calico cat.
"Um why do you even have a cat in your book bag?" Zelda asked shaking her head at her weird sister.
"He wanted to come with me. Anyway he can climb down there attack the spider and run back up here. Hopefully the spider will follow."
Sep 17, 2012 04:47PM

42935 "Yeah but theres no door or anything back there so I don't know I guess we can try it." Teffal said.
"So i guess its time to kill that spider now." Zelda said trying to be optimistic.
Sep 15, 2012 11:58AM

42935 "Kill what later?" Zelda asked. Teffal was looking at a peice of paper that she had found on the ground. "It's a map to get out. It says we have to go back to go forward. What the heck does that mean?"
Sep 05, 2012 06:21PM

42935 "Yep sure thing." Teffal said walking ahead. Zelda waited for everyone else to go before following.
Aug 27, 2012 06:59PM

42935 "No what was up with its eyes?" Zelda asked.
"Where the heck did you get that thing at?" Teffal said looking at the capsule.
Aug 21, 2012 02:03PM

42935 Teffal pulled as hard as she could and pulled her up. Zelda distracted the spider by throwing things at it.
Aug 21, 2012 11:50AM

42935 "Can you jump or something? Find something to stand on like those bones maybe? Zelda asked.
Aug 19, 2012 11:44PM

42935 "OMG look its a huge spider coming out of that skulls mouth!" Zelda shivered and backed away from the hole. Teffal was pulling some rope out of her bag and threw it down. It was half a foot short from reaching the bottom.
Aug 15, 2012 06:23PM

42935 Teffal grabbed Derek's arm and pulled him up. "What the heck! You do not go jumping into dark holes after people! You have no idea whats down there and you could so be dead right now!" "Anastasia are you alive?"
Aug 14, 2012 07:21PM

42935 "Are you good enough to walk?" Teffal asked Derek.
"Sorry i poured to much I was worried." Zelda said looking down at the ground.
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