E.J.’s Comments (group member since Sep 18, 2011)

E.J.’s comments from the Multi-Author Stories group.

((The devil, Satan, Belzebub... he has many names. I respect other religions because I think they're all the same, but with different names))

((Whichever one it might truly be... Idk your religions so I not specifying.))

((Yes, yes I did))

((I just answered your question without choosing one of your options... Your mind = blown!))

((Neither, the creator had to create both))

((I'm not sure what to do with it...))

((That's cuz the name of the deadly sin is sloth... the name of the slut sin is indeed lust... You don't have to change it, but just so you know.))

((K's))

Jonathan sprinted through the forest, a bow and arrow set in his hands, his grip firm on the bow's curve. The arrow slipped neatly between his third and fourth fingers as he aimed the bow while running. The deer didn't stand a chance as it fell to the might of a single arrow piercing its heart. He knelt near it, and finished it quickly to end its pain.

He hung it up in the forest for later, and then left for his home. His house was a small rickety hut... the weird thing about it was that it was up in a tree. He leaped from branch to branch until he finally reached it. He left his bow and arrow near the doorway and then walked inside. It was a rather homely place with dust littering the furniture and dirt trails across the floor.

"Home sweet home," he muttered as he kicked off his boots. Jonathan was a peasant and couldn't afford the new thing they called a shoe. It was like a boot, but with a shorter top. It seemed silly. What if you had to walk through a river or creekbed?

He grabbed a cloth, wetted it in a bucket and wiped the grime off of his face. He replaced it and looked in a piece of glass nearby. His mother wouldn't approve of the quality of his cleanliness, but then again she wasn't alive. Neither was his father.

But his mind was wandering now. He shouldn't be thinking of these things. He grabbed his cleaning kit of knives that he had stolen from the city and walked back to the deer. A raven was pecking at a hoof.

Jonathan left it alone. The animals soothed him slightly, but they couldn't replace the pain he had in his heart.

I love making plants do my bidding!
But animals would be great too...

((one "L" in gala.))

((A sad story... perhaps his test will make him run for his life...))

Name(what they're called): Jonathan Maddox
True name(Abnegation: meaning selfless): Abnegation
Age(16-19):18
status(peasant, Duchess, Duke, Princess, etc.):Peasant
Element(Choice 1): Earth (if this means he can control plants)
Element(Choice 2): Nature
Appearance:
Mini Bio: He was born a peasant, but his mother kept telling him he was much more special than that. He believed her up until her death of the plague last year. His father then died after that of a deadly influenza. He has no siblings left, but he lives in the forest.
Spirit Companion/Artifact:
Wolf, Otter, or Fox

I made a character creation topic then.

Name: Jasmine
Sin: None, she's the creater
Gender: Female Computer-Generate
Age: 8
Personality (related to sin): She's a monotonous sounding machine who tries to make the odd pun or joke related to the puzzle. She sounds like a generic small child, but can be one of the most dangerous players in this game.
Appearance (Try to use descriptions, but I will accept pictures):

Except she's blue if she appears on TV screens, Computer monitors, or any other media related device. She likes to talk through radios.
Relative Level of Intellect (1-10): 10
Other: She is not evil... she is merely the creator.

Name:
Sin:
Gender:
Age:
Personality (related to sin):
Appearance (Try to use descriptions, but I will accept pictures):
Relative Level of Intellect (1-10):
Other:

Um, yeah I noticed my title... didn't you see me yell PLOT MONKEY!

And one more positon: Sapphire- the controller of the games who created the puzzles and kidnapped them all. She can be heard through the speakers throughout the house. She tells them why they're there and how to get through the puzzle. You only know its a girl because of a computer-generated voice that stays monotonous the whole time.

I'll be Sapphire!

PLOT MONKEY!

Name: Jasmine Thoreau
Gender: Female
Appearance: Jasmine is a tall girl, nearly lanky, with long flowing hazelnut hair. She prefers to have it tied back in a ponytail at most times. She doesn't wear fancy clothing not does she dress sloppy. Her common attire would include converse sneakers, jeans, and a basic graphic tee. She has bright grey eyes that set her apart from most people in her family. She is mildly muscular in a way from her athletics which include cross country, track and field, and volleyball. She has a wide, bright, smile that instantly sparkles a room.
First Choice Tracker: Tracker 5
Second Choice Tracker: Tracker 7 (Although I like both equally)
Personality: She is a very rambunctious girl who enjoys making people feel better about themselves. If she wasn't so shy around new people, she could be a public speaker. She is a lover of animals and nature, so if you try to harm either she will destroy you. A healer by nature, she has read many books on botany, apothecary, and anatomy. She is a bright girl who enjoys a good book and will devour one in a few days max.
History: Her father left them when she was born and her brother was miscarried. Her mother is broken and prone to crying fits. Because of this, Jasmine has a helpful personality and likes to make people feel happy. She doesn't let her past bug her... ever. She only believes in the future.
Family: -If any are left- She has only her mother left. Although she is broken from her divorce and miscarriage of her brother. She doesn't do much besides work, come home, and cry. She tries to create idle chit chat, but it's not very deep.
Other- She has a few pets including a raven named Luna; a frisky squirrel named Nutty; and a cat named Seppher. They all like to run around together.