Trey’s Comments (group member since Dec 24, 2012)

Trey’s comments from the iWrite group.

Hello, people. I'm working on the first chapter of draft two and I am calling for your help. I need some honest thoughts and criticism. Please don't pull your punches. I need the brutal true, its the only way I can learn. There may be some grammar errors and typos, they will be buffed out in draft three. The link to the doc is below.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BxGf...

Hello people, I need some more help with my book. It takes place in world where demons and humans, usually in a segregated communities. The main character was raised by a family of demon hunters. On his 18th birthday, that family is taken by a powerful demon that seeks a challenge and forces the main out into the unknown world. On the very same day, the Main finds out that he is half demon. Along with his search for his family, he must learn to accept what is and how it affect what he become. His has a personality and never takes things anything too seriously, except when it comes to his loyalty to his friends and family. The question is should I add some romance to you. If so, I welcome any and all tips.

Hello people, I need a little help with my book. The setting is a world where humans and demons coexist; some places are more hostile, than others. The main character is a demon hunter in training, going through rite of passage. I am trying to choose between two different scenarios. In the first, he is place in an arena to fight to the death with a massive demon. In the second, he is quest to bring his father the head of a missive demon from the demon’s village.