Victoria’s Comments (group member since Feb 13, 2019)

Victoria’s comments from the The Writer's Block Group group.

Thanks! :) I'm almost done with the first draft. I just have one more part to finish, then I can finally start editing!

I'm writing a novella about a college graduate who can't find a job in the field he studied, so he joins the gang in his neighborhood, which is tied to a cartel. Basically, it's about his moral downfall from always following the rules to breaking laws for drug dealers.
I'm actually getting more and more discouraged as I write my first draft. I know first drafts always suck, but I am seeing that I'm having a hard time with grammar, specifically because of POV.