Michael’s Comments (group member since Jan 31, 2025)

Michael’s comments from the First Readers (Beta Readers) group.

Are you interested in trading for reviewing my first chapter for my reviewing yours? The first chapter is about 4300 words.

The log line for my completed fantasy novel is: The fate of a world rests on a young druid wished into existence whose untrained magic brings about the collapse of the druid order and the death of his closest friend. The vision of an arrow striking the druidess he loves sends him on a journey to save her whereupon he meets a cantankerous old mage who takes him on as an apprentice to become a Druid Master.

If interested, email me at mi.cote@northeastern.edu. The first chapter is so important, I want to make sure it is as compelling as possible before sending to a literary agent.