IK’s Comments (group member since Jan 28, 2025)

IK’s comments from the First Readers (Beta Readers) group.

Eva wrote: "IK wrote: "Eva wrote: "Hi

I am seeking second round Beta Readers for my debut novel, DARKEST OBSESSION, a psychological dark romance thriller (approx. 90,000 words).
The story is intensive and the..."

Great! My email is attached to my previous message.

Can’t wait to read your manuscript.

Eva wrote: "Hi

I am seeking second round Beta Readers for my debut novel, DARKEST OBSESSION, a psychological dark romance thriller (approx. 90,000 words).
The story is intensive and the TW extensive, so pleas..."

Hello Eva,

I've just read the blurb for your manuscript. I think the concept you've created, however short seems interesting. I personally think it’s nice to see a psychopathic female hit man, you definitely don’t see that everyday lol. It’s something I’d like to read.

However, I am a paid beta reader and editor. I have a couple years of experience across multiple genres, and I can provide a detailed analysis of your manuscript.

I offer:
* Feedback on characters, pacing, plot, tension, and suspense.
* Honest in-line comments and reactions in your manuscript.
* A detailed report summarizing your story’s strengths and areas to improve.
* Typos corrected (if you’re okay with it!).
* Actionable suggestions to enhance your work.
* Ongoing support—I’m always here to answer your questions.

My rate is $1.00 per 1,000 words with a 7-day turnaround. You can view testimonials and detailed service information on my website: https://thebookconn.wordpress.com/

If you're interested, please contact me at ikthebeardman@gmail.com

I'm excited about the possibility of working with you to bring your vision to life.

Best regards,
Ik

Asghar wrote: "I’m looking for dedicated beta readers for my debut novel, Ghosts of Kurosawa — an action-packed, layered thriller with a touch of sci-fi, at 129,000 words (yes, I know -- its long, but trust me, i..."

Hello Asghar,

I've just read the blurb for your manuscript. The concept you've created sounds fascinating, and I'd love to help you refine and enhance your work.

As a beta reader and line editor with years of experience across multiple genres, I can provide a detailed analysis of your manuscript.

I offer:
- Feedback on characters, pacing, plot, tension, and suspense.
- Honest in-line comments and reactions in your manuscript.
- A detailed report summarizing your story’s strengths and areas to improve.
- Typos corrected (if you’re okay with it!).
- Actionable suggestions to enhance your work.
- Ongoing support—I’m always here to answer your questions.

My rate is $1.00 per 1,000 words with a 7-day turnaround. You can view testimonials and detailed service information on my website: https://thebookconn.wordpress.com/

If you're interested, please contact me at ikthebeardman@gmail.com

I'm excited about the possibility of working with you to bring your vision to life.

Best regards,
Ik

İlayda wrote: "Hi everyone! I’m looking for beta readers for my first novella, Echoes of Blue, a deeply emotional story about love, loss, and the weight of our inner battles.

📖 About the Book:
Two strangers mee..."

Hello Ilayda,

I've just read the blurb for your manuscript and I'm genuinely intrigued by the premise! The concept you've created sounds fascinating, and I'd love to help you refine and enhance your work.

As a beta reader and line editor with a couple years of experience across multiple genres, I can provide a detailed analysis of your manuscript.

I offer:
Feedback on characters, pacing, plot, tension, and suspense.
Honest in-line comments and reactions in your manuscript.
A detailed report summarizing your story’s strengths and areas to improve.
Typos corrected (if you’re okay with it!).
Actionable suggestions to enhance your work.
Ongoing support—I’m always here to answer your questions.

My rate is $1.00 per 1,000 words with a 7-day turnaround. You can view client testimonials and detailed service information on my website: https://thebookconn.wordpress.com/

If you're interested, please contact me at ikthebeardman@gmail.com

I'm excited about the possibility of working with you to bring your vision to life.

Best regards,
Ik

Hi Chelsea,

I just read your blurb and it seems quite interesting, the fact you're daring to go against the usual story path makes your book stand out. I'd love to work with you. As a book critique specialist and beta reader, I provide comprehensive feedback to enhance your work.

My services include in-depth analysis of character development, story flow, plot consistency, and narrative tension. You'll receive a thorough evaluation of your manuscript's strengths and areas for improvement, plus targeted feedback addressing your specific concerns. I'll also help catch any typographical and minor grammatical issues.

I deliver results within one week at a competitive rate of $1.00 per thousand words. Ready to transform your manuscript? Contact me via this thread or at ikthebeardman@gmail.com to get started.

Drake wrote: "Hi everyone,

I'm looking for feedback on a short fantasy adventure story that ties in with a series that I'm writing. It's already professionally edited; I just want a handle on how it strikes yo..."

Hi Drake,

Looking to elevate your manuscript with expert insight? With years of experience as a book critique specialist and beta reader, I provide comprehensive feedback to enhance your work.

My services include in-depth analysis of character development, story flow, plot consistency, and narrative tension. You'll receive a thorough evaluation of your manuscript's strengths and areas for improvement, plus targeted feedback addressing your specific concerns. I'll also help catch any typographical and minor grammatical issues.

I deliver results within one week at a competitive rate of $1.00 per thousand words. Ready to transform your manuscript? Contact me via this thread or at ikthebeardman@gmail.com to get started.

Ava wrote: "Hi,

I was wondering whether anyone would be able to beta read a draft I just completed for an adult romance novel.

It is a sports romance which features childhood friends to lovers, mental healt..."

Hi Ava,

Looking to elevate your manuscript with expert insight? With years of experience as a book critique specialist and beta reader, I provide comprehensive feedback to enhance your work.

My services include in-depth analysis of character development, story flow, plot consistency, and narrative tension. You'll receive a thorough evaluation of your manuscript's strengths and areas for improvement, plus targeted feedback addressing your specific concerns. I'll also help catch any typographical and minor grammatical issues.

I deliver results within one week at a competitive rate of $1.00 per thousand words. Ready to transform your manuscript? Contact me via this thread or at ikthebeardman@gmail.com to get started.

Michael wrote: "Are you interested in trading for reviewing my first chapter for my reviewing yours? The first chapter is about 4300 words.

The log line for my completed fantasy novel is: The fate of a world rest..."

Hi Michael,

Looking to elevate your manuscript with expert insight? With years of experience as a book critique specialist and beta reader, I provide comprehensive feedback to enhance your work.

My services include in-depth analysis of character development, story flow, plot consistency, and narrative tension. You'll receive a thorough evaluation of your manuscript's strengths and areas for improvement, plus targeted feedback addressing your specific concerns. I'll also help catch any typographical and minor grammatical issues.

I deliver results within one week at a competitive rate of $1.00 per thousand words. Ready to transform your manuscript? Contact me via this thread or at ikthebeardman@gmail.com to get started.