Dylan’s Comments (group member since Oct 15, 2008)

Dylan’s comments from the Your writing group.

I've finished chapters 8 and 9. Please read.

I've finished chapter 7 just now. So read it.

I've finished ch. 6! Tell me what you think! :D

-Dylan

I have just finished chapter 5, tell me what you think. Also don't read if you can't watch violent movies. Thanks! :D

-Dylan

Thanks, I'll update it and make changes when I have time. :D

O.k. thanks! :D

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it, I'll do some editing now. I'll add more details about the characters. What should I do to make it better? Should I say what the characters are feeling, or how they look? Just trying to get some more elaborated advise. Thanks for reading! :D

I've got chapter 3 up too.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Has anyone read this yet? Please do, I want my story to be reviewed. I really want to be an author someday and need critisism! Thanks! :D

I've got chapter 2 up, please read it. :D

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

This is a story I'm working on. I'd love to become a famous author someday. It's called Drunk on Blood. Please give feedback on what you thought of it, and how I can improve. It's fairly short so far, but I'm still adding more to it. Thanks! :D

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...